Topic: Hey Everyone let me know if you like this poem I though of
Tyhronn's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:29 AM
My Poem called "From the Heart"


: Sometimes when my spirits are to the ground

: I know I have to turn things around

: I let too many things eat at me

: I think to myself how can I let this be

: These days I just want to be a one man show

: Because how I feel sometimes no one will ever know

: I can be mad at the world, what is that going to prove

: It is just making the wrong move

: I just look up at the sky

: For know reason, I guess it's because I want to cry

: This is how I feel from my heart

: I got to be cool, because in the end, it will tear me apart


bgeorge's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:41 AM
clap clap clap...brendaflowerforyou flowerforyou

Tyhronn's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:43 AM
thanks Brenda :)

no photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:44 AM
very nice poem. can I ask is that poem based on true feelings?

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:46 AM
Very good... flowerforyou

southerntouch's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:46 AM
Very cool.

bgeorge's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:49 AM
no ty...thank you...:smile:

starsandhearts's photo
Tue 11/13/07 11:52 AM
r u doing ok?just think positive try not to think negitive hope ur doing better....i'm here if u wanna talk.have a great day!Jess

no_psychos_please's photo
Tue 11/13/07 12:45 PM
Smile and be happy! bigsmile drinker

pkh's photo
Tue 11/13/07 03:10 PM
very nice but in the end we find the stenghth to carry on...wish you the best