Topic: Disguised
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Fri 11/09/07 05:37 PM


you're such an artist of deceit

with your snapped cracked words

pouring out of the side of your mouth

with all the sincerity of a used call sales man

moonshine and roses scattered before me

with the luring appeal of bitter candy

held out before a child's face

but i jumped for it

just reached out and grabbed

and found myself laying face down

on the ground

like an idiotic suicide jumper

falling from a one story building ...

... not enough damage to kill me

but enough to make me feel a fool~

and off you go skipping

contented and so cool

laughing at

another silly woman

who didn't see

the lies behind eyes that

smile as they pierce you

oh yeah those eyes

you are ...

such a master of lies ...

... such a Master of Disguise...









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Fri 11/09/07 05:38 PM
LOVE THIS! Can totally relate. good job

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Fri 11/09/07 05:39 PM
Thank you~flowerforyou

polypeasant's photo
Fri 11/09/07 05:40 PM
good one flowerforyou thanks for all those spaces in between.....
hope we all don't keep falling for the liesgrumble grumble

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Fri 11/09/07 06:05 PM
<<---rarely falls for those lines...!

Thanks Poly! flowerforyou

creationsfire's photo
Fri 11/09/07 06:07 PM
wow, can totally realate..good read

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Fri 11/09/07 06:07 PM
You are truly a poet.

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Fri 11/09/07 06:13 PM
Thanks you Creationsfire flowerforyou

Thank you TJokerz~flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Fri 11/09/07 06:21 PM
unpleasant to read
the headline snickers
there has been another
ugly
and fruitless divorce
wasted feelings amidst
asset tallies

the crumpet on the side
and the view through
a window
in a mordant fall drizzle
amongst virus spawn
with mold and bacteria
during the flu season

no_psychos_please's photo
Fri 11/09/07 06:23 PM
The Master Wizard you are! Is there anything you don't do well sweetheart? noway bigsmile

:heart: flowerforyou smooched flowerforyou :heart:

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Fri 11/09/07 07:06 PM
"unpleasant to read
the headline snickers
there has been another
ugly
and fruitless divorce
wasted feelings amidst
asset tallies

the crumpet on the side
and the view through
a window
in a mordant fall drizzle
amongst virus spawn
with mold and bacteria
during the flu season"

EXCELLENT! flowerforyou


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Fri 11/09/07 07:07 PM
flowerforyou "The Master Wizard you are! Is there anything you don't do well sweetheart?"

Unfortunately darling, quite a few things....

SoonToBeDivorced's photo
Fri 11/09/07 07:48 PM
I love it...your visual effect is great too!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 11/10/07 01:52 AM
another fine piece my dear...your library of words just flow onto the page and you express them well.

frankfk's photo
Sat 11/10/07 06:32 AM
NICE, WHO IS THAT JERK WIZARD:wink: flowerforyou

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Sat 11/10/07 09:48 AM
Soontobe~Thank you darlin~~flowerforyou flowerforyou

Oh Wolfy, I do so appreciate your comments honey :heart: flowerforyou


Frank, are you going to go break his knee caps for me???? grin...actually its nobody in particular, I was working off memory...I wouldnt let THAT happen to me again no sireee! :heart: flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 11/10/07 02:19 PM
Wow I have soooooo been there- flat on my face...

flowerforyouflowerforyou

Good write MsWizard

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Sat 11/10/07 06:28 PM
flowerforyou Thank you MsTeddy!!! flowerforyou