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you're such an artist of deceit with your snapped cracked words pouring out of the side of your mouth with all the sincerity of a used call sales man moonshine and roses scattered before me with the luring appeal of bitter candy held out before a child's face but i jumped for it just reached out and grabbed and found myself laying face down on the ground like an idiotic suicide jumper falling from a one story building ... ... not enough damage to kill me but enough to make me feel a fool~ and off you go skipping contented and so cool laughing at another silly woman who didn't see the lies behind eyes that smile as they pierce you oh yeah those eyes you are ... such a master of lies ... ... such a Master of Disguise... |
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LOVE THIS! Can totally relate. good job
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Thank you~
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good one thanks for all those spaces in between.....
hope we all don't keep falling for the lies |
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<<---rarely falls for those lines...!
Thanks Poly! |
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wow, can totally realate..good read
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You are truly a poet.
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Thanks you Creationsfire
Thank you TJokerz~ |
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unpleasant to read
the headline snickers there has been another ugly and fruitless divorce wasted feelings amidst asset tallies the crumpet on the side and the view through a window in a mordant fall drizzle amongst virus spawn with mold and bacteria during the flu season |
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The Master Wizard you are! Is there anything you don't do well sweetheart?
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"unpleasant to read
the headline snickers there has been another ugly and fruitless divorce wasted feelings amidst asset tallies the crumpet on the side and the view through a window in a mordant fall drizzle amongst virus spawn with mold and bacteria during the flu season" EXCELLENT! |
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"The Master Wizard you are! Is there anything you don't do well sweetheart?"
Unfortunately darling, quite a few things.... |
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I love it...your visual effect is great too!
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another fine piece my dear...your library of words just flow onto the page and you express them well.
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NICE, WHO IS THAT JERK WIZARD
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Soontobe~Thank you darlin~~
Oh Wolfy, I do so appreciate your comments honey Frank, are you going to go break his knee caps for me???? grin...actually its nobody in particular, I was working off memory...I wouldnt let THAT happen to me again no sireee! |
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Wow I have soooooo been there- flat on my face...
Good write MsWizard |
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Thank you MsTeddy!!!
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