Topic: You
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Tue 11/06/07 09:48 PM
I'm silently screaming
While restlessly sleeping
Never ending wanting
Fills me completely
A ceaseless needing
I feel so empty
Longing for love
Longing for you
You who invades my dreams
You who quiets my screams
Of lonelyness
When will i wake...
To find you here with me
Not just in my dreams

fredwood28's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:49 PM
thats a good one

karmafury's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:53 PM
Very good one.
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Tue 11/06/07 09:59 PM
Very nice!!!!

UWannaBSpontaneous's photo
Tue 11/06/07 10:07 PM
I awaken to a scream
Does she really exhist
Is she out there restless
Wanting needing the same way
I send her my being
To calm her soul
To hold the loneliness
Till it subsides
There is a peaceful calm
She slowly awakens
Opens her eyes
To see the light
It was her dream
I was there


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Tue 11/06/07 11:03 PM
thanks for readin everyone

uwanna your poem is nice also
why do u keep writing what seem like response poems to mine?

UWannaBSpontaneous's photo
Tue 11/06/07 11:14 PM
Well I heard a scream and got up. Then all of the sudden there's this spiritual rush that becomes a silent lure to write....

And write I did.

John