How sweet could it be
for all we ever wanted to become a reality
for the dreams we tried to catch
becoming in arms reach
for the lessons we have learned
we become able to teach
for a girl wit a broken heart
to find the man she always tried to seek
As easy as that might seem
for her its not easy to achieve
cause on one hand she tries to decide
what is it she really needs
do she really want to do deeds
that leave folks in awe
acting like dope-fiend
hopes seen
but never in her heart will they be
or open up to someone who
is far from make believe
where now she cant be free
no more thinking of me
or be stay kept in the back pocket of someone
else's jeans
where no one can hear her screams
save her from those things
that shes accustomed to
which lead her life downstream
never giving her a chance
to do simple reasoning's about things to her
that's extreme
like knowing the fact that someone out there
can treat her like a queen
or to even believe in her self
to know she is a queen among all other things
****ed up is
what she is
lost is where she was heading
so now she trying to go in a new direction
where there are mental erections
wit inspections
and less infatuations
where hers become love
but his can lead to devastation
but wit hesitation
and some limitations
on her newly found and old situations
Because she knows what works for her
and that is by keeping GOD in the equation

great poem
thanks for sharing

Beautiful!

Thank you for stopping by.

Thank you 1956CLEO I am grateful enjoyed. All of you thank you!

ohhhhhhhhhhhh Love & Light to you,,, Beautiful..

likes that alot shay

I am so happy I joined JSH community! Thanks all for enjoying. I do not share my poetry wit but my best friend and I really appreciate the kidness from all I am getting. Thank you all. This is a great community! Thanks

Very good Shay!

One word i have to describe this poem= AMAZING...so many people for get the most important part of any equation is God...great job on this poem...its unbelievable

Yes. It comes a time where you must realize that there is no love that you can receive or give greater from and to GOD! By his graceness all is possible and his blessings are beautiful. After we realize there is none greater to love and that the highest degree of love you can receive true love with another is not true. By loving and keeping GOD in the equation, you develop more love for self and understanding of how to love others. I am not perfect but I am taking one step at a time!
Thanks again for the responses

Very nice post, Shay!

very good girl and welcome to the site

Shay - Doesn't it feel good to reach deep inside, pull out your feelings and plant them on paper?

Beautiful poem. Encouraging.

Yes it does Jesse. I feel like writing is the best way for me to say exactly how I feel and what I truly want to say. Sometimes it is very hard to speak it out loud because you have to becareful at times the words you choose and the feelings of others and words out my mouth are often misinterputed when I speak. So I love writing! Whether it be letters or poems or even just jotting down thoughts and things about my day it is more effective for mr. Thank You

Yes it does Jesse. I feel like writing is the best way for me to say exactly how I feel and what I truly want to say. Sometimes it is very hard to speak it out loud because you have to becareful at times the words you choose and the feelings of others and words out my mouth are often misinterputed when I speak. So I love writing! Whether it be letters or poems or even just jotting down thoughts and things about my day it is more effective for me. Thank You

Yes it does Jesse. I feel like writing is the best way for me to say exactly how I feel and what I truly want to say. Sometimes it is very hard to speak it out loud because you have to becareful at times the words you choose and the feelings of others and words out my mouth are often misinterputed when I speak. So I love writing! Whether it be letters or poems or even just jotting down thoughts and things about my day it is more effective for mr. Thank You

Yes it does Jesse. I feel like writing is the best way for me to say exactly how I feel and what I truly want to say. Sometimes it is very hard to speak it out loud because you have to becareful at times the words you choose and the feelings of others and words out my mouth are often misinterputed when I speak. So I love writing! Whether it be letters or poems or even just jotting down thoughts and things about my day it is more effective for mr. Thank You

Yes it does Jesse. I feel like writing is the best way for me to say exactly how I feel and what I truly want to say. Sometimes it is very hard to speak it out loud because you have to becareful at times the words you choose and the feelings of others and words out my mouth are often misinterputed when I speak. So I love writing! Whether it be letters or poems or even just jotting down thoughts and things about my day it is more effective for mr. Thank You