Topic: angel came a calling
tonyatoto's photo
Tue 11/07/06 03:21 AM
With the sins of an angel
who lost her soft wings
she disobeyed her duties
now her heart burns and stings
my once beautiful angel is broken
she's sore and in pain
she came to me when i slept
where my anger shows and gains
my angel's crying and cold
and her heart is barely beating
"don't cry my angel, you\'re safe here"
as her glow is slowly receding
angel who are you really?
let me see your face"
she stood there quiet
she said "Happiness is Grace"
"angel what's your name?
can you tell me please?"
"i need you to just listen
and notice all in me...
"i came down here to help you
to show you who you are"
"i don't get it angel...
why travel so far?"
"you've been kept in darkness
light will be within,
as soon as you inside of you
show you true self to him."

"who my angel? and why are you scratched and torn?"
"think of who you really are
and you'll find that your reborn...

"show yourself to your love,
so you'll both be forever in love,
that my dear is what you heed
thats why i came from above"

"can i look at you angel?
can i see your beauty?
tell me what happened
who did this to you so rudely?"

"who are you angel?
why cant i know?"
almost in a whisper
"I'm sorry i must go"
"what haven't you told me angel"
"that you must learn yourself"
"just don't cry no more please"
with my hands her skin was felt

"angel where are you from?
why are you all scratched?"
"I'm from the future heavens
and by my sins i was attacked"

"what? how could that hurt you
he'd it cause so much pain"
"i lost the one i love more than life
and now I'm forever stained"

"i had nothing else and i
thought that I'd never heal
i wish i would've opened up to him
but i was to afraid to feel."

"so do just as i say
and don't let your
world walk away

I'm you my darling
don't let your love go to waste
happiness is golden
happiness is grace"



sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 11/07/06 04:26 AM
Beautiful Tanya...

chica42ny's photo
Tue 11/07/06 04:28 AM


She really has that touch with poems!

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Tue 11/07/06 04:42 AM
one of the best ones on here so far, thanks

michael1313's photo
Tue 11/07/06 09:17 AM
please sweet angel,
pass your heart unto mine,
for in my heart,
you my find peace to unwind,
softly you sleep,
your eyes have teared,
oh, how your lost heart has feared,
please fear no more,
at your hearts door,
I'm the one to hold Dear,
though you still fear,
whisper to your hearts ear,
that I am th one you hold Near...

hers is fine poetry, to bring my eyes tears,
just had to respond ,thru my hearts tears...

tonyatoto's photo
Tue 11/07/06 06:17 PM
thank you!
I am glad you all liked it!!

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Thu 11/09/06 05:15 PM
More beauty from the mind of TONYA WILL

tonyatoto's photo
Fri 11/10/06 09:04 AM
thank you everyone I am glad you
enjoyed

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Sat 11/11/06 09:05 PM
i love it very nice tonya