Topic: How can I improve my profile?
VaLizzy's photo
Fri 04/15/16 07:18 AM
Hi,
Feedback can be scary, but.. I want, no need to see myself as others see me. I've dated, but WE have not met yet!
So please be honest, but kind.

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Fri 04/15/16 07:47 AM
Not bad. I'd add a little bit about what you're looking for.
The second photo is a bit odd? Like two photos merged together?

PacificStar48's photo
Fri 04/15/16 07:59 AM
The tenor of this profile is nice. Think it will be a lucky guy who picks you.

Your interest paragraph was a little run on and could be restructured a little and be more effective.

I would add more pictures and photo shop the barred backdrop out of the lead shot. It suggests a bed or a rocking chair; probably neither your most flattering. I think your motorcycle pick is ok but again not the most flattering and the guys in the background may not help your dating effort.

You need a nice full length photo so you get that out of the way. And since often the question is how many people live with you; you probably want to address the ages/number of dependents. Since the response is often hostile to pictures of children I would keep it vague; example "one teen son;two twenty something daughters in college.

I wish you well and glad to see you join our community.

sparkyae5's photo
Fri 04/15/16 08:15 AM
come on guys give the lady some answers!!!!....i gave her mine...

VaLizzy's photo
Fri 04/15/16 08:22 AM
THANK YOU, your constructive review is greatly appreciated. I will consider each one carefully.

SitkaRains's photo
Fri 04/15/16 08:28 AM
I like your profile I do agree that you need more pictures.
I do get a sense of who you are. I also think you are looking for like minded. And yet maybe list some things you are really looking for in a man.

Also with your interests listed already with camping and yard work, gardening I am not so sure if you want it in the main body of the profile also.

Best wishes in your search
Welcome

mzrosie's photo
Fri 04/15/16 09:39 AM
Hi VaLizzy, welcome to Mingle2

I think your profile is very good.
No complaints here.

Join us here in the forums and have fun making friends while you're looking.

Good luck in your search
waving

AlphaB2Eros88's photo
Sat 04/16/16 02:17 AM
THIS PROFILE IS AWESOME SISTER KEEP IT UP!
I mean you have a lot of interest that would catch any mans.