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Topic: Would I Lie To You?
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Sat 10/27/07 12:52 PM
Oh baby, yes,
you are so good to me.
You treat me like a queen,
you love me so well
(those bruises will fade.)
And no! I don't mind
you staying out all night
(drinking with the boys.)
The utilities?
Oh no, we didn't need
them anyway,
(who needs electricity
when we have so many candles?)
And I know you don't mean
to ignore me,
you're just really busy
working so hard to give
me all I need, all I
could ever ask for...
(It doesn't matter that
all I ask for is a little
bit of your time,
a moment to connect...)
I haven't eaten in two days
but thats quite alright!
I was getting too fat anyway
(you just go ahead and
bet on that game!)
I know we only make 90K
a year so don't you worry,
I can work full time AND go to school
I'll work it out somehow,
you wont have to spend a dime!
Oh No! I don't doubt your love
(even though you never say it.
and your eyes look right thru me
never seeing who I am ...)
Yes. Really, I love you too,
Even though my lips are
bleeding, I can smile as I
say it, I'm your wife,
I'm all yours don't you know~
*Would I lie to you?





LLH5's photo
Sat 10/27/07 01:11 PM
Hi Wiz...great stuff as usual. flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 10/27/07 01:18 PM
:cry: sooo been there before, and finally found the strength to get out...hope others who are in that situation now can too.

flowerforyou mswizard

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Sat 10/27/07 01:24 PM
I have two shoulders if that would help? :cry:

You have an artful way of pulling the emotion out of your readers. flowerforyou

paper_heart's photo
Sat 10/27/07 01:28 PM
that poem just suites me so well as to where i am in a relationship rite now. love hurts

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Sat 10/27/07 02:11 PM
"Hi Wiz...great stuff as usual."

Thanks sis....xoxooxoxxoflowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 10/27/07 02:12 PM
"sooo been there before, and finally found the strength to get out...hope others who are in that situation now can too."

Good for you! Nobody should have to stay in a relationship like that!

flowerforyou flowerforyou


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Sat 10/27/07 02:13 PM
"I have two shoulders if that would help?

You have an artful way of pulling the emotion out of your readers"

Awww I appreciate it Jess...its not me I'm writing about though I appreciate your shoulders...:heart: flowerforyou

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Sat 10/27/07 02:13 PM
Sat 10/27/07 01:28 PM
"that poem just suites me so well as to where i am in a relationship rite now. love hurts "

It can also kill you. Get out while you CAN paper!!
((((HUGS)))):heart: flowerforyou

LLH5's photo
Sat 10/27/07 02:36 PM
Wiz..I still want you to do a limerick for me...You know I love them....Did I spell that right?

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Sat 10/27/07 02:51 PM
That's just sad and so NOT right! I just put a neighbor lady on a bus and store her stuff until she can make arrangements. I find it hard to believe a "MAN" could do such a thing, but I know it happens. :cry:

Pillow fights can be fun though :wink:

How about it sweetie? Take me on? bigsmile

:heart: flowerforyou :heart: smooched

Duffy's photo
Sat 10/27/07 02:54 PM
well if you aren't lying to him u better start. and i would keep a frying pan close by just in case he finds out u r lying.

place it squarely on the back of head while sleeping, knocking some sense into him, so u won't have to lie anymore.:wink:

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/27/07 05:15 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

missed you lovely

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Sun 10/28/07 08:15 AM
"Wiz..I still want you to do a limerick for me...You know I love them....Did I spell that right?"

Give me a topic Lisa and I'll work on it ok? And yes you spelled it right...grin...

xoxo

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Sun 10/28/07 08:17 AM
"That's just sad and so NOT right! I just put a neighbor lady on a bus and store her stuff until she can make arrangements. I find it hard to believe a "MAN" could do such a thing, but I know it happens.

Pillow fights can be fun though
How about it sweetie? Take me on?" Oh you're asking for trouble here Ken! I'm QUEEN of Pillow Fights! You might want to rethink that request prior to getting ears, mouth nose all filled with feathers!!!laugh flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Sun 10/28/07 08:19 AM
awesome wording and i m indeed you r a good pillow fighter too:wink: flowerforyou

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Sun 10/28/07 08:19 AM
"well if you aren't lying to him u better start. and i would keep a frying pan close by just in case he finds out u r lying.

place it squarely on the back of head while sleeping, knocking some sense into him, so u won't have to lie anymore"

Dovey I'm not writing this poem about ME, just from the perspective of a woman being abused. Trust me, if a man treatd me that way, there would be no sneaking around to hit him with a frying paid, I'd lay his azz out completely and utterly and he WOULD see it coming. I promise he would.

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Sun 10/28/07 08:20 AM
(((((DENISE))))) Miss you too darling!! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:


Mornin Frank! Yes I AM a good pillow fighter (grin) we could get one going on the boards....here WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHACCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKing fRANK WITH A PILLOW......laugh flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 10/28/07 08:22 AM
who u are beating now:wink: laugh laugh

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Sun 10/28/07 08:26 AM
that would be YOU I'm beating Frank....these damn down pillows...you can hardly feel a thing can you??

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