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| Topic: I don't have a name for it... Be gentle with me. | |
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Everything is breathing
Up and down and up and down The lifeless things are living The heartless things are beating The sightless things are seeing The faithless are believing Everything is breathing Up and down and up and down The hurting things are healing The dead things are growing The wounded thing are loving The sinning things are praying Everything is breathing Up and down and up and down |
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Ugh. Sorry about the typo!
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I really liked this gives us all hope
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You've got the title right there in it..."Everything"
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Altered realities, born with each new day...... that you can smile
 Very nice
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Thanks
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ohhhhhhh so very nice |
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Awwwww... thank you shweetie!
*hugs* |
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it is very good. has meaning and gives faith to the faithless. very few poems have that effect. keep it up and your heart is what will heal you. keep the faith and God will walk with you guarding you keeping you safe from all evil. so to sum it all up, thank you for your words. they are very inspiring.
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AWwww... Thank you Boi!
That made me smile!
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Giving hope to the faithless, very good poem
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Be gentle?
This was a good piece why were you so worried |
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I dunno... I guess cause I rarely share what I write.
It's something I take seriously and I guess people get scared when other people don't like it? I have no clue. I've turned into a sap lately. LOL. 
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Understandable
I was the same way BUt you will notice soon that there is no reason to worry Everyone here is great and positive They will embrace what ever you write
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and if someone does post something negative don't worry just use it as a tool.
It's all about what your feeling no one can tell you how to feel |
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that's a really good point there obscurelight. Man I love the love flow of this site. to see how christ works in the world, its just amazing. I'm glad I found this place.
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I thought this was very vibrant. I liked it very much. You should post again - and dont be afraid to share what you feel. We are all on the same ship, really.
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Well. Thanks guys.
I'll have to dig around and see what I can come up with. 
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This was really nice! I liked it a lot!
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