I have yet a title to this one...but wrote it this morning before I laid down...hope you enjoy it.

As I lie here upon my bed,
Staring at the ceiling and looking ahead,
Wondering what life would be with you,
I close my eyes and the vision appears,
All bad things are put in arrears,
Dreaming of the things that we could do.

Activities abound, of the things we like,
We try them all and I hope I might,
Be able to wrap my arms around you,
We bowl for awhile, take a long walk,
Sit by a campfire, for an all night talk,
But with this, my dream isn't through.

We share our stories and a laugh or two,
Looking upon the stars, I put my arm around you,
To hold you close and keep you warm,
You feel secure, as you lean into my shoulder,
The brisk night air starts to get colder,
As the coals of embers take their form.

We go into the tent as night passes away,
With dawns dew mist, brings in a new day,
The night was awesome as I could tell,
We woke with a stretch and a smile,
As we gaze upon each other for a while,
Knowing in our hearts it went well.

So, as I lie here upon my bed,
Thoughts flowing through my head,
I awake with a smile and look to my right,
Being with you brings thoughts of good cheer,
Wishing all the while that you were here,
Grabbing a pillow I sleep through the night.

Awwwwww this is very good



Humm maybe "New Dawn"

or New Beginnings

I'll keep those in mind Kristi, thanks...

Very nice one Wolf

Where are all the good women at?

Thanks blonde and Kristi, I always enjoy hearing from ya'll...
longhair....all the good women are in here...I know because I have quite a few as friends.

Very nice

Nicely done, "Prophesy of You", perhaps

Hey wench, that's a good one as well...I'll keep these in mind and let everyone know what I chose to title it.

Heres another idea wolf....Night Dreams

Awwwh, a wolf in chase,
wonderful piece, as I let my eyes feast
at the sight of these words would,
please
any woman
you have shared
these emotions with
for she would hold you so dear
without any fear....

Title:

"The things we'd do, just me & you"

Thanks Rhonda and Noden, Got those titles written down too...we will see who came up for my title.

Your welcome, who's the lucky gal?

As Kristi would say Sssssshhhhhhhhhh....

The person that reads that knows who she is...by our commonalities.

hehehehe ya using my words hummm shssssssssshhh lol



ahumm


Visions in my Mind

These Visions

very nicely painted wolf

Longing...

excellent write Wolf

amazing are your words so beautiful,,

I thank you all for your very nice comments. The titles keep coming in and it's getting harder. SO far I have one that ya'll picked that rings a bell. Ya'll will soon find out who picked it.