Topic: “Look and See”
TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/24/07 05:38 AM
“Look and See”

With your eyes you don’t even see.
That standing before you is me.
How is it you do not know?
Must one give you a show?
Just to get your attention.
Or is it sex they must mention.
Just to get a second.
Do you reckon?
You think then there’s a chance.
You would give me a glance.
And see who I’m.
Or would that take too much time?
Just for you to look my way.
And for once you not look away.
Just one time look deep inside.
What is there can not be denied.
It’s a heart that would belong.
Be right beside you all day long.
No matter where you would go.
You would always know.
Beside you they would stand.
Hand n hand.
Never would they betray.
Nor would they ever stray.
Your love would be held deep.
A lifetime they would keep.
If only you would look there way.
And take the time to really see them one day.


K.L.M
10/24/2007

timothyhouk's photo
Wed 10/24/07 05:54 AM
That one is very nice,good day starter!!

no photo
Wed 10/24/07 06:24 AM
I feel the same way, great writing as usual.flowerforyou flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 10/24/07 06:53 AM
Kristi is venting again but that was a good write. Keep it up girl.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 10/24/07 08:56 AM
flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Wed 10/24/07 09:01 AM
Words of the heart flutter in the wind as slilken sheets spread across your bed, a soothing read.

Good morning Tx...:heart:

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/24/07 09:03 AM
(((( Puddin Cup ))))

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TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/24/07 07:56 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ya are alll way too kind you all are the best and reason I come in herebigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

shutterguy's photo
Wed 10/24/07 08:09 PM
nice
great work girl

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/25/07 09:17 PM
awwww thank you shutterbigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

frankfk's photo
Fri 10/26/07 05:54 AM
awesome wording kristi

no photo
Fri 10/26/07 06:43 AM
Soulful...I like it!!!

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 10/26/07 06:45 AM
straight from the heart..I love that Kristi :smile: flowerforyou