Topic: In Your Eyes
UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Sun 10/21/07 06:44 AM
As I gaze into this window
That sits here in front of me
It’s a picture of the sunrise
O’er the Caribbean Sea
And the colors run together
From the ocean to the skies
Like the colors that I saw
When I looked in your eyes
I saw candlelight reflected
I saw the shining morning dew
I saw the promise of tomorrow
With a timeless gaze at you
I was carried on the night wind
To a special place I knew
Where the sands and tide embrace
Full moons silhouettes gleam blue
My feet found that old trail
Up from the parking lot
The moonbeams lit my path ahead
Toward the summit that I sought
I was up and by the lookout
Where the seal’s cry is heard
And I passed by the trail fork
With out a solitary word
I could see the final rise beyond
And felt that old time emotion
I’d been here time and time before
High above the living ocean
My cares fell off like water drops
And were taken by the wind
My hair was tossed and time was lost
As the night breeze kissed my skin
I could see the coastal markers
Keeping safe the nighttime strays
And I listened to the music
The tune the harbor signal plays
It took moments, nothing more
As I came to realize
I had traveled far in time and space
From just looking in your eyes
And when our fingers first
Arrived, the touch I can remember
How it felt so soft and warm
There in the cold that trails December
How soft your skin and then within
How warm a place to find
How I lost place in your embrace
Time didn’t seem to mind
It was quite special to me sharing
With a warm and pretty soul
Who like me has seen some roads
That took out a healthy toll
And our lips pressed together
As we began our slow goodbye
Your kiss the most delicious
As my pulse began to fly
I was with you by the ocean
Beneath that same old moonlit sky
Arm in arm held tightly
Stars on the water passing by
Perhaps standing upon the very sand
That lives in my heart each day
Or on the water in a sailboat
As the waves helped us to sway
The fireworks like shooting stars
And I caught them in my mind
And made a wish on everyone
Not to leave this time behind
And the colors I still find here
And the tastes and the sensations too
Of a moment spent like falling leaves
In the spell I found in you
As I gaze into this window
That sits here in front of me
It’s a picture of the sunrise
Over the Carribean sea
And the colors run together
From the ocean to the skies
Just like the ones I saw
When I looked in your eyes
©MM






Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 10/21/07 10:15 AM
WOW that was a real descriptive write. I really enjoyed that one. I'm sure any female would enjoy hearing that one.
Robert

UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Sun 10/21/07 03:22 PM
Well, Robert, for heavens sake, send some over and I will read it to them! JK, thanks Bro. Stay tuned - Tomorrow I will post my tribute to Monday mornings and the San Francisco Bay

Mike

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 10/21/07 03:31 PM
Beautiful!

flowerforyou happy flowerforyou

Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Mon 10/22/07 07:00 AM
Why thank you MsTeddyBear2u, you are too sweet!http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/reply/45750#
Love

blonderockermom's photo
Mon 10/22/07 07:02 AM
Very beautiful indeed:smile: flowerforyou

UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:06 AM
Thank you BRM :)

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:51 AM
Username if I could send them to you do you really think they would make it that far with me looking for them as well? Come on now....If I have too many I'll send what I can't handle...lol..

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:57 AM
Awwww beautiful indeedbigsmile flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 10/23/07 11:15 AM
I liked that ... lovely images bigsmile flowerforyou

UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Tue 10/23/07 11:25 AM
Loo, why not? And thank you thank you thank you