Topic: Finding Love
no_psychos_please's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:25 AM
Her beauty is unmatchable, her words they touch my heart
I wish to tell her many things, but don't know where to start

I wish to tell her feelings that I have and cannot write
Of how I wish to make her smile, to look on her each night

I wish I could just offer her, whatever she might need
To make her feel the same of me, feel my soul in need

Give to her a way to see, the things my heart holds dear
To tell her she is beautiful, of how I wish her near

Maybe tell her wonders, I have seen within my life
Or maybe tell of loneliness, that cuts me like a knife

My children grown, they have moved on, leaving me behind
To always feel a lonliness, a peace you cannot find

Now life is new, with noone there, no love to comfort me
The rooms now echo silence, where laughter used to be

How much I wish, that I could be, the reason for a smile
Or be enough, to make her wish, to share with me a while

So many things I wish to share, with someone sweet like her
How do I bring her near to me, make her heart feel sure?

I guess I'll simply just be me, and hope to touch her heart
So she might wish to have me near, whenever we're apart

lilcountrygirl's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:41 AM
That's beautiful. I can relate to the feelings that it displays.

angelus1226's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:42 AM
that was just too beautiful for words.

sama's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:43 AM
What a beautiful poem, but quite sad in places!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:46 AM
That was beautiful NPP....you could really feel the sway in your lines. But maybe the girl you are wishing for is the girl across the riverbank...lol.

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:49 AM
Awww ken, that was so beautiful, and touchingflowerforyou

Hang in there my friend...love will find you, and yes, just keep being you, and it is bound to happenflowerforyou

no_psychos_please's photo
Sat 10/20/07 08:58 AM
I thank you (((all))) so very much! I have found an Angel of light in my world and we will soon begin a journey of discovery. My "Misty". She fills the dream of every poem I have ever written, yet from a distance. I await her for the hopeful reality of my dreams. Soon I hope to dream a new reality.

flowerforyou flowerforyou

just_mary's photo
Sat 10/20/07 09:26 AM
lovely you sing the song of many us suddenly single after the children are grown

no_psychos_please's photo
Sat 10/20/07 09:33 AM
Sad but true ohwell We devote our lives to our children never feeling alone, and when they leave...... and then to re-enter the scene..... my how things change! It's not something you think about it seems until they are gone, and the lonliness sets in

Again, I welcome you and your talent to our forum of friends (((mary))) flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/20/07 09:34 AM
(((( Ken )))))

Beautiful,, yes dreams do come true,,, Your soul shines bright my friend,,, I wish you all the happiness in the world,,,

Hugs and love to you flowerforyou flowerforyou

no_psychos_please's photo
Sat 10/20/07 09:42 AM
(((Denise))) my sweet sweet friend. I like to think myself a poetic heart. I wish to believe that fantasy and dreams are simply unfulfilled realities..... and may that never change!

Hugs and love to you too precious heart flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou smooched