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Topic: Do you like my poem "Perfect Woman"
ItalianRomance_F4X1 Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 49	Thu 10/18/07 08:11 PM
Perfect Woman Your body is like a goddess, So perfect and impeccable, Your eyes are like the ocean, So beautiful and full of life, Your smile is like the sun, It can make beautiful of a rainy day, Your legs are like silk, so smooth and mysterious, Your lips are like fruits, So full and luscious, Your hair is like an addiction, I can not help but touch it, Your mind is like a book, So smart and full of knowledge, God is a genius, For creating something so flawless.

no_psychos_please Joined Sat 07/21/07 Posts: 1131	Thu 10/18/07 10:22 PM
So there you have it then. Every woman I know is perfect! Kewl buddy

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/18/07 10:22 PM


Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 10/19/07 06:25 AM
Hey Italian that was pretty good.

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Fri 10/19/07 06:27 AM
very nice

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 10/19/07 07:22 AM


ItalianRomance_F4X1 Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 49	Fri 10/19/07 05:21 PM
Thanks Blond and wolf. I spilled my heart into this one and it turned out pretty well. If anyone else writes, feel free to post it because I love to read other peoples things too.

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