Topic: The Storm
Blueeyedtexan's photo
Thu 10/18/07 04:53 PM
The Strom.


Do you hear that? The birds have stopped singing.
Where is the light? The sun has disappeared.
The darkness seems to consume everything in sight.
The day has turned to nigh.

The braches scratch at the windows so vigorously.
The wind howl is sounding more like a growl, as the
lightning begins.

One flash, no theres two. The thunder joins in.
What is that sound? Is it the branches hitting the
window again? No the rain has joined in.

First it was a soft rainfall. Now it's coming down with
a vegeance, pelting everything in sight. As I sit there,
it's like watching a show.

With the lightning suppling the light, the thunder play's
the music roll, and the rain puts on the performance
that you hope won't end. The combination of the three
sends chills straight through me.

Before you know it, the storm is as an end. The sun
is out, and the birds are singing again.
What a perfect end.

no photo
Thu 10/18/07 04:55 PM
I love the poems of storms especially when they take you along.
Great postflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/18/07 05:47 PM
good onebigsmile

no_psychos_please's photo
Thu 10/18/07 05:49 PM
ROCKIN! drinker Behold the tempest washing clean Earths slate to begin it's write again!

flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 10/18/07 06:46 PM
Ahhhhhh the smell after a fresh rain... flowerforyou

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Mon 10/22/07 08:20 PM
Oh, the storm :smile: Sets me back in my chair, much like a visit to the tropical zone. Intense and very well said, especially, the lightening part supplying the light. Who needs Stephen King? Shivers....drinker

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Mon 10/22/07 08:22 PM
This one definitely takes you there! smooched