There’s a flower behind a wall
I caught a glimpse of it one day
It’s bright, it’s pretty and smiles
When the sun shine it’s way
Brick by brick the wall went up
To protect the other side
Inch by inch the flower grew
To reach the sun in stride
Now the flower behind the wall
Is no more in bloom
The wall grew great to block the sun
The flower lives in gloom
The flower behind the wall
Is desperate to reach the sun
It’s daily struggle to open up
Seems just can’t be won
So brick by brick the wall comes down
To meet the beck and call
And return the shining sun
To the flower behind the wall

Thats very deep and meaningful...

Very well done!!!!

very nice
welcome and enjoy

here is a poem that i wrote for that speciol day that i meet my true sole mate. i hope you all like it .


TO A FRIEND
When I first heard your voice it was like a whisper from above, I felt the

Excitement and joy run threw my blood.

I did not know what to say or do, I just wonted to be close to you.

As we shared lives stories I came to see, that you were the one meant for me.

So as I stop to Neal and pray I ask that you except me on this special day

For the man that I am and the one that will love you to the end

And love I will show you agean and agean

So I ask you to smile with me and lets begin , and pray together that this won’t end.

As I hope to some day make you my wife lover and friend.

With my love Johnny
06/20/07

Let the sunshine through...

Damn good poem LRR. Loved it

Walls erode with time, life goes on, and the Sun will rise

Good write and welcome to a place where the sun always shines.... here among friends

very nice. i really like the metaphor.

Why can't I write like this?
Great read

I feel your pain OL, i really need to work on some more "beans". LOL