Topic: Love Storm
green_eyes_dream's photo
Sun 09/20/15 01:09 PM
Love Storm

Raindrops down the window pane
Sound of thunder fills the air

A storm of confusion in my head
My heart is in despair

Wind is howling the rain is heavy
On and on it rages

My soul to you was an open book
You tore out all the pages

By Don Zimmerman
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Ladywind7's photo
Sun 09/20/15 01:59 PM
Edited by Ladywind7 on Sun 09/20/15 02:00 PM
That is cool. The ending is so abrupt, loved it.

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Mon 09/21/15 01:10 AM
nice

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Fri 10/09/15 08:45 PM
flowerforyou


Well done...

chronicliar75's photo
Fri 10/09/15 11:48 PM
Wow!:thumbsup: