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the sun peeks throught my window as i sleep,the carpet filled with shapes like diamonds squares, when i walk in they change shape,, colours rest upon the floor red yellow green, from the glass table i think,, cob webs come to light as the sun shines against them bright, spiders sit their resting, awaiting a victim, the dog lays takeing in the rays i sit watching as the sun peeks throught my window,
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Great job. My favorites are "carpet filled with shapes like diamonds and squares" as well as "spiders sit their resting, awaiting a victim".
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Awesome
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Beautiful imagery and play on words. Needs editing but great piece.
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