Topic: something I wrote.
singingmyheartout's photo
Sun 10/07/07 01:32 PM
Borrowed time and bull**** lines

rehearsing a life with cursed design

Looking beyond what is, what will be

past the point of invincibility.

Falling fumbling failing they stare

at the fool who wishes to be invisible here.

She cries out to silence, nobody there.

In stillness it echoes in endless fear.

Borrowed time that someday ends

she knows not what became of friends

Locked up, shut out, withdrawn and alone

you didn't take the time so you wouldn't have known.

Empty and silent... to the deaf went her pleas

Turned away like an ill-fated disease

You sat there saying it was all in her head.

"It's life" was all anyone said.

It's life. It's life.

that's all they could say.

Well **** it.

I'm done living this way.

-jm

Heartofplatinum's photo
Sun 10/07/07 01:53 PM
thats really good. i like it!happy

s1owhand's photo
Mon 10/08/07 08:02 AM
noway

excellent.

drinker
flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 10/08/07 08:25 AM
flowerforyou nice