Topic: a Poem i wrote called "YOU"
Cheer_up's photo
Fri 01/16/15 08:44 PM
"YOU" You are the light that shines in my heart with every beat,i feel brighter and brighter with joy and Happiness you are like the sun and moon and the stars put together you shine with love like the sun you glow with kindness and caring like the moon you sparkle like the stars with the beauty of your eyes and body in and out you amaze me with new things that you know you are a dream that everyone wants but i only have and is honored to have you are number one before anyone has a chance and most of all i love you cause your you .... ................. just thought i would share this poem with you all cheers waving :thumbsup: happy

lmsanderson28's photo
Sun 01/18/15 08:05 AM
This is really sweet... very much a 'clean' love which appears to not have been tarnished or strained.
I would love to see it in stanza form so that I could see where one thought starts and ends..

If you wrote it for someone, you should share it.. It's beautiful.