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Topic: I feel you there
JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Mon 10/01/07 08:46 AM
Every night, when we part I rush to bed, to the dark And there you lay, in my dreams Just in the shadows, or so it seems I feel you there, watching, waiting I feel you there, anticipating Every day, when I awake A mental image, I do partake Just in the shadows, there you’ll be Warm and solid, watching over me I feel you there, in my mind I feel you there, all the time

shutterguy Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 22516	Mon 10/01/07 08:50 AM
love the poem great work ((((((((((((((((((((((jb))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Mon 10/01/07 08:52 AM
Very nice...brought a SMILE to my face!!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Mon 10/01/07 08:53 AM
Very good, our dreams do keep us going

Snugglesbyfire Joined Sun 04/15/07 Posts: 24422	Mon 10/01/07 08:53 AM
beautiful

tazer Joined Wed 09/06/06 Posts: 4	Mon 10/01/07 08:54 AM
Loved the poem Tazer

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Mon 10/01/07 08:55 AM
thank you all.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 10/01/07 09:22 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 10/01/07 10:24 AM
very nice

HangedMan Joined Sun 05/13/07 Posts: 13640	Mon 10/01/07 02:03 PM
Excellent poem JB..

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Mon 10/01/07 02:07 PM
Whoaa..awesome JellyBean

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Mon 10/01/07 05:46 PM
{{{everyong}}} thank you for your kind words.

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