Topic: Full Of Hurt And Lies
ImWhtUWnt19's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:29 PM
One Year Ago We Met
One Year Ago We Fell In Love
I Trusted You With All My Heart
I Wanted To give U The World
You Kept telling me nothing would ever harm me
And that you would always be thereYou made me beileve you
And you made me love you everyday
Everytime you said I love you I was in heaven
Until I caught you
Days go by and you dont call
I stop by and you dont invite me in
Finally I realize your a lie


Please everyone post your thoughts on what you think of itt...



shadow_princess's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:35 PM
that was very heartfelt chris good job flowerforyou

Rapunzel's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:39 PM
I think that many people mistake kindness for weakness.

I don't know why some people lie and go around lassoing people's hearts, only to ride on into the sunset with them...

And we are left trying to gather up what is left of our broken hearts and try to move on in life and it sucks big time..

I am sorry when good people are hurting..it is not fair..
All of that scamming and terrible treatment of another human being has the tendency to make good people not want to be so open and trusting next time ..And that is sad to not be able to be honest and open because you don't know who you can trust..

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:42 PM
very nicely done...can totally relate:smile:

ImWhtUWnt19's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:43 PM
This poem means everything to me its one of my best I been told...

no photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:43 PM
Excellent piece..I think most people can relate to it

ImWhtUWnt19's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:45 PM
Well would you all like to see another one of minee...?

bgeorge's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:52 PM
i love it

bgeorge's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:52 PM
oops, yes i would

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 09/28/07 02:54 PM
sure..:smile: