Topic: Meticulous
MariahsFantasy's photo
Wed 08/06/14 07:03 PM
idling from the bedside
it's cold outside
frost appearing around the unusual window
snowflakes drifting, floating
in the air i already know

i take my book of secrets
pen in hand, words coming forth
my shoulders huddle
i pull the jacket over me
the one you left behind
so i could still feel your arms

now the words flow like rain
down the pipe of thoughts and on the page
toward a golden pave

my eyes drift about the room
so much story
so little i forgot
the times where work
didn't consume
the constrained minutes of life

smells of ice filling the seasons strongly
everything is careful, patience is delicate
as i finish the piece, sleep tugging the edges
of my eyes
wanting to sink me underneath the covers

stay awake, just a little longer
icicles forming, too beautiful to slumber

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Wed 08/06/14 07:04 PM
flowers flowers flowers
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Thu 08/07/14 04:46 PM
..Nice..

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Fri 08/08/14 04:14 AM
nice...

i pull the jacket over me
the one you left behind
so i could still feel your arms


great

MariahsFantasy's photo
Fri 08/08/14 09:54 AM
Awe thanks you guys! :heart: bigsmile
Haven't written one for a while.

rapsscallion's photo
Fri 08/08/14 03:08 PM
Liked it, seemed to resonate. Well done

R

RainbowTrout's photo
Fri 08/08/14 03:17 PM
:smile:

MariahsFantasy's photo
Mon 08/11/14 09:58 AM
bigsmile :heart: thanks!