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Like the wind...
She blows through your mind, Echoing... past memories, Yet in your heart you find... A whisper, a breeze, A hurricane at times, Her laughter, her smile, Wisdom in her words of rhyme. Honest, sentimental, Whimsical breath upon the air, Sensuous, tantalizing, A calming breeze dancing in your hair. Captured, mesmerized, By her daring and her charm, A tempest in the making, Causing stir, some alarm. Pulled in by her rapture, As she bares her soul, Will you stand to face her Or swiftly move and go? Love's wind upon your brow, Echoing all through the night, Will you fight to keep her, Or let her slip away and out of sight? Distant, you can feel her, A beat within your heart, Though she's far away, It's as if you never part. Her gail lifts your spirits, In the corners of your head, You think of her morning, noon, and night, As you stir from your bed. Encompassing, refreshing, A gentle breeze wafting to and fro, You realize you love her, As her winds blow through your soul. SDF September 22, 2007 |
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This is really, really beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
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You are welcome Sugar!
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Very nice.
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Girl that is beautiful and awesome loved it
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Txs... great seeing you on again! Oh and thanks!
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truly beautiful
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Beautiful as always
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Beautiful, this brought a smile to my face. I really love the stanza "Captured, mesmerized/By her daring and her charm/A tempest in the making/Causing stir, some alarm," reminds of of the excitement and energy I hate when I first met my husband
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Thank you for all of the feedback!
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Very Beautiful
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