Topic: A Tempest In the Making
Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/22/07 01:28 PM
Like the wind...
She blows through your mind,
Echoing... past memories,
Yet in your heart you find...

A whisper, a breeze,
A hurricane at times,
Her laughter, her smile,
Wisdom in her words of rhyme.

Honest, sentimental,
Whimsical breath upon the air,
Sensuous, tantalizing,
A calming breeze dancing in your hair.

Captured, mesmerized,
By her daring and her charm,
A tempest in the making,
Causing stir, some alarm.

Pulled in by her rapture,
As she bares her soul,
Will you stand to face her
Or swiftly move and go?

Love's wind upon your brow,
Echoing all through the night,
Will you fight to keep her,
Or let her slip away and out of sight?

Distant, you can feel her,
A beat within your heart,
Though she's far away,
It's as if you never part.

Her gail lifts your spirits,
In the corners of your head,
You think of her morning, noon, and night,
As you stir from your bed.

Encompassing, refreshing,
A gentle breeze wafting to and fro,
You realize you love her,
As her winds blow through your soul.

SDF September 22, 2007




SugarMagnolia31's photo
Sat 09/22/07 01:34 PM
This is really, really beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/22/07 01:38 PM
You are welcome Sugar!

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Sat 09/22/07 01:40 PM
Very nice.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 09/22/07 01:40 PM
Girl that is beautiful and awesome loved it bigsmile flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/22/07 02:01 PM
Txs... great seeing you on again! bigsmile Oh and thanks!

Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/22/07 07:43 PM
:smile:

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 09/22/07 07:47 PM
truly beautiful:smile: flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 09/22/07 09:25 PM
Beautiful as alwaysflowerforyou

SisterShaman's photo
Sun 09/23/07 01:30 AM
Beautiful, this brought a smile to my face. I really love the stanza "Captured, mesmerized/By her daring and her charm/A tempest in the making/Causing stir, some alarm," reminds of of the excitement and energy I hate when I first met my husband happy flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Sun 09/23/07 02:51 PM
flowerforyou Thank you for all of the feedback!

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Sun 09/23/07 03:02 PM
Very Beautifulflowerforyou flowerforyou