Topic: Dance Among the Trees
Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/22/07 06:54 AM
Dance Among the Trees is about the fate of a leaf as autumn changes to winter.

Oh to dance among the trees,
Of crimson red or forest green,
Free as a lark or bird of blue,
Delicate as a drop of dew.
To pirouette first up then down,
Or slowly sway to kiss the ground,
Until the wind draws up a gust,
Begin again as autumn must.
Graceful as a falling star,
Strumming , strumming- old guitar,
Finale radiant though veins be crisp,
Dropping, dropping in pale mist.
Children gather among the trees
Cascading colors . . . a frenzied breeze
Triumphant flies her fate once more,
Whirling, whirling to meet the floor.
She dances once, she dances twice-
Among the trees to greet the ice,
Wintery boughs shall miss her dance,
Among the trees upon a branch.

SDF



blonderockermom's photo
Sat 09/22/07 07:08 AM
Wow!! That is soooo beautiful Mystique!
Thank you for sharing that with us.:smile: flowerforyou

ChelleBelle's photo
Sat 09/22/07 07:17 AM
flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 09/22/07 08:27 AM
flowerforyou happy

SisterShaman's photo
Sun 09/23/07 01:38 AM
Such graceful personification of something we all so love to see! Beautifully written- can I be a leaf dancing in the trees as I fall?

Mystique42's photo
Sun 09/23/07 03:32 PM
flowerforyou Thank you for all the feedback

pkh's photo
Sun 09/23/07 05:17 PM
That was beauifulflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 09/24/07 10:19 AM
Awesome girl you do have a way with words bigsmile flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Fri 09/28/07 10:37 AM
Thank you Txs... this is one of my favorites.flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Fri 09/28/07 12:03 PM
Beautifully executed, a brilliant rendition of one of the most exquisite seasons. Thank you for sharing. flowerforyou flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Thu 10/04/07 09:52 AM
Bumping this back up... cus it's one of my favorites. LOL

shutterguy's photo
Thu 10/04/07 09:55 AM
beautiful suz love it