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Butterflies fluttering round and round The sun is rising my heart pounds I hear your voice It's time to fly, I have no choice to meet my love with style and poise I have to trust this big ole bird a safe journey is what i pray she'll carry me through the clouds, I race on eagles wings, I hear your words whispering to me It's crazy , I know, but what can I say my body rages with anticipation no consequences, just long conversations and music swayin Butterflies quiver deep inside my soul is open wide I arrive at dusk as the sun sets in my pulse quickens as I hear you again I see you there with open arms to you I run, oh what happines you bring Butterflies flutter round and round A sweet haven I have found This is for you K...Hope you like it... |
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WOW THAT IS AWESOME
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OMG, you have brought tears to my eyes
and made me speechless for a moment which is very hard to do.lol I not only like it I LOVE IT. I can say its the first time I have every had a poem wrote for me. I'm totally flattered beyond any words that I can express. I will print it and cherish it for the rest of my life. Thank You from the bottom of my heart you are a very special FRIEND! |
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aw "Txs",,,you speechless??? nice poem S.C.G.!!! good job!
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Hummm, yeah believe it or not it can happen
for there are not many people that can impress me with there words as sweetcountrygirl can But... guess that is what you call a true FRIEND! |
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That poem was the greatest!
You really are a great writer. |
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I agree TxGirl...but are you sure its your poem... it sounds a little to
sweet to write to another girl...?????? |
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Ontario do you have any ideal what she is even talking about
hummm tell me big boy since you seem to know poem analaze this one for me. |
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T-Girl... What are you asking me...?
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Plan english tell me what this poem is actually about what is she
talking about? In the poem. |
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Don,t you know...?
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Ontario I know excatly what the poem is about
and did not have to ask her I'm asking you do you know? Can you really tell me what she is talking about? |
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Regardless of what it is about to you, or me the point is you enjoyed it
and so did I...enjoy your trip. |
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Lmao so you don't know?
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Why are you being so persistent?
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Never mind I got my answer forget it Ontario.
Another day. |
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Good...you were beginning to worry me.
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Play nice now...
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Agreed!...a poem is not to be picked apart,,,but to be enjoied for how
it stands,and what it does to your hearts...M. |
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