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Topic: ~ love that door
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 05/24/14 05:59 AM
I've always had problems with doors the sound of the click knowing which to open knowing when to close a commitment to open a commitment to close unable to look back I've always had problems with doors they slam creak squeak close-off open and interrupt I've always had problems with doors sometimes forgetting to close and lock them at night the weatherstrip cracked and peeling then you came along and opened a door I didn't know I had

mowildflower Joined Tue 07/27/10 Posts: 892	Sat 05/24/14 07:42 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 05/24/14 10:56 AM
Aww, sweet

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sat 05/24/14 03:56 PM
Wow!!! Is that ever powerful, teasing. " . . . And then you came along - opening a door I didn't know I had ". What a 'slam' of a closeout. What a worldly beauty you've shared with us. What a glance into inner-self. The whole poem reads so very well, line for line. Loved this, teasing!!! Loved it! tomo / "The Island " ===

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 05/24/14 04:03 PM
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 05/24/14 07:19 PM
Doors: a functional necessity love it ((C)))

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 05/25/14 04:43 AM
mowildflower pkh nice to see you tommy generous you thankyou Ainjel k pleased you read it

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 05/25/14 07:13 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 05/25/14 08:06 AM

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