Topic: I would appreciate feedback. Still fairly new to this...
ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 09:57 AM
I was surprised to find that it was not easy for me to fill out the "about me" section of my profile. Usually, I am better at writing what I would like to say than actually speaking it, but in this case, it seems more difficult, because although I am still new to this, and know I have the opportunity to make some really good friends, I am still conscious to the fact that there is still the possibility of finding that special someone, and it seemed that most of what I had to say about myself was better said up front, even if it seems like a deterrence to some, especially with it being so lengthy. I just believe it is all things someone would like to know up front. That being said, any feedback or advice, especially from the sincere and respectfully honest ladies, would be greatly appreciated. Thank you, and may you all have a wonderful day =^)

soufiehere's photo
Wed 05/21/14 10:57 AM
Very pleasant profile.
Paragraph separations are your friends :-)

TawtStrat's photo
Wed 05/21/14 10:59 AM
Well, you certainly sound sincere and honest and you don't sound like you want to let being disabled get you down, although I'm sure that you have your bad days.

I don't usually advise people to go on the forums if they're looking to meet someone but in your case I think that it might be a good way to make some new friends. Best of luck to you.

Shy_Emo_chick's photo
Wed 05/21/14 11:17 AM
It's a really welcoming profile. What a nice person you come across as. I won't be surprised if tons of women start e-mailing you from the get-go. It's a very pleasant read. It made me smile. You won't have to put in much effort to find a woman, as you seem very sweet ;)

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Wed 05/21/14 11:29 AM
I loved the fact that the first thing you mention are your kids.
That for me speaks volumes about a person.
I wish you and your kids all the luck in the world.
flowerforyou

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:01 PM
Edited by SparklingCrystal 💖💎 on Wed 05/21/14 12:01 PM
Peculiar --> You start off with a lot of negatives, as in using "not" an awful lot, which is generally very off-putting. Yet you manage to pull it off to use it a great many times and not give the reader a negative feeling. Somehow it has a nice, gentle feel to it all.
I think it may have to do with you being a poet, writing skills, a feel for words etc.

Anyways, all in all pleasant and honest.

Welcome and lots of luck!
flowerforyou

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:27 PM
Thank you, soufie. I actually tired indenting, tabbing, and spacing to define separation of paragraphs, but it lumped it all together every time I hit save. Any advice on how I can type it to make it separate my paragraphs?

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:27 PM
Thank you, Tawt. I will have to do that. I already found the poetry forum and posted a couple there. May you have a good day =^)

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:35 PM
Thank you, franky =^)

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:36 PM
Thank you, Shy. I am glad that I was able to make you smile, specially as you have made me smile, as well =^)

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:38 PM
Thank you, CrystalFairy =^)

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Wed 05/21/14 12:41 PM
Hey a Kentucky fella! flowerforyou I thought your profile was great and Im sure the ladies will appreciate your honesty. I know I did. Best Wishes and Welcome!

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:44 PM
Thank you, carebear =^)

soufiehere's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:45 PM

Thank you, soufie. I actually tired indenting, tabbing, and spacing to define separation of paragraphs, but it lumped it all together every time I hit save. Any advice on how I can type it to make it separate my paragraphs?

Are you using a mobile device to generate text?

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:47 PM


Are you using a mobile device to generate text?

I am. Is that the culprit?

soufiehere's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:52 PM



Are you using a mobile device to generate text?

I am. Is that the culprit?

Yup :-)
You are just lucky it does not misread the words
themselves, then change them around.
I do not have one, so I cannot advise :-)

ImperfectPoet's photo
Wed 05/21/14 12:57 PM




Are you using a mobile device to generate text?

I am. Is that the culprit?

Yup :-)
You are just lucky it does not misread the words
themselves, then change them around.
I do not have one, so I cannot advise :-)

Thank you again, soufie =^)