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Topic: ~Dreams of You~
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Mon 04/21/14 06:56 AM
Edited by BrandNewJourney on Mon 04/21/14 07:52 AM
This is something I wrote the other day when my mood was better than today.



Dreams of You

I have always dreamt of you whenever I closed my eyes

I could feel my stomach bouncing with excitement
I could feel the butterflies dancing wildly inside
I could feel you looking at me with desire
I could hear your sweet voice echoing in my head

I could feel your lips lightly touching mine
I could smell your flesh as you moved closer
I could see your smile as you leaned in
I could feel the warmth of your touch
I could feel your breath upon my neck

I could see your eyes and their spark
I could see them in the night like a star
I could feel your heart beating as you held me
I could feel the strength in your tender touch
I could feel the safety in you arms as you pulled me close

I could see the man I desired before me yet,
I could see your silhouette and nothing more

You were but just a dream
You were so far out of my reach
You were what I knew I deserved
You were what I have always yearned for
You were there always in my dreams, haunting me
You seemed real but in reality you were not

Today I have finally opened my eyes
Today I see you standing before me
Today I hear your sweet soft voice in my ear
Today I know the taste of your lips
Today I know the sound of your racing heart
Today I can still smell your flesh as we laid tangled together

Today your smile makes me smile from deep inside
Today your touch sends little fires racing through my entire being
Today your warm breath ignites desires deep inside of me
Today your eyes shine bright like the warm sun when I look into them

Today I feel whole and complete
Today I feel like a woman
Today I feel desired
Today I feel beautiful
Today I feel as though I am still dreaming
Today I know that I am truly alive
Today I finally know what making love really is
Today I know how amazing you are

All of this because of you
All of this because you are no longer a dream
All of this because I know that you are real
All of this because you found me
All of this because you finally woke me from my dreams

You are no longer a dream, as I have opened my eyes
You are here no longer out of my reach
You are now here to hold my hand

Journey 4/19/2014

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Mon 04/21/14 10:20 AM
BNJ......it's beautiful, deep and full of feeling flowerforyou

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Mon 04/21/14 10:24 AM
Thank you gibbs flowerforyou

rapsscallion's photo
Mon 04/21/14 10:48 AM
Good that you now feel that special way

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Mon 04/21/14 10:59 AM
Yes I believe so.

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Mon 04/21/14 12:56 PM
flowerforyou

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Mon 04/21/14 12:59 PM
Thank you kc flowerforyou

no1phD's photo
Mon 04/21/14 11:23 PM
. journey. I am at a loss for words..
. your thoughts your words are more beautiful than this....

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Mon 04/21/14 11:25 PM
.. sorry that pic is a little big...happy

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Mon 04/21/14 11:32 PM
Thank you so much no1 flowerforyou

These words came from deep inside of me.

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Fri 04/25/14 06:57 AM
Wow. So beautiful. flowerforyou

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Fri 04/25/14 07:15 AM
Edited by BrandNewJourney on Fri 04/25/14 07:16 AM
Thank you dreamer flowerforyou

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Fri 04/25/14 07:44 AM
Edited by tommyboy1101 on Fri 04/25/14 07:46 AM
Hey, NewJourney,

I liked this piece of yours very, very much. Was deep enough so. You spoke from a real inner wealth of feelings and I could feel them, this not from a typical male's point of view, but rather from an 'anybody' reader's standpoint. This was full of feelings.

I tell you this, you keep writing this type of work and you'll do alright here inside this fecked up world in which we, all, so most uncomfortably dwell.

Well done, NewJourney, well done.

tommy boy moran / Ireland

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Fri 04/25/14 07:57 AM
Edited by BrandNewJourney on Fri 04/25/14 08:02 AM
Thank you tommyboy flowerforyou

It had been many, many, many years since I had written anything like this.

Many, many, many, many years since anyone had aroused in me the need or want to write anything like this.

My emotions, my feelings, my thoughts, and someone special brought forth the need to write this poem.

I felt the need to get it down on paper where it could be heard.

Where the emotions I felt inside could be seen clearly at any time.

So that on my darkest days the inner feelings were visible through the dark clouds

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Sat 05/10/14 11:48 AM
This afternoon I sit beneath this Maple tree reflecting back on what brought these words to me.
Life has always found a way to knock me down it seems.
It may take me a while to get back on my feet sometimes.
Through clearer eyes I can still see the beauty that was given to me.
Today I stand stronger and ready for whatever life decides to throw at me.

pkh's photo
Sat 05/10/14 01:30 PM
As beautiful as you are

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Sat 05/10/14 03:44 PM
Thank you so much (((PKH))) flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Junychris's photo
Mon 05/12/14 11:14 AM
Wow, this is so sweet ,I must confers you're good

Junychris's photo
Mon 05/12/14 11:28 AM
wonderful!

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Mon 05/12/14 12:08 PM
flowers flowers flowers
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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