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Edited by
BrandNewJourney
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Mon 04/21/14 07:52 AM
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This is something I wrote the other day when my mood was better than today.
Dreams of You I have always dreamt of you whenever I closed my eyes I could feel my stomach bouncing with excitement I could feel the butterflies dancing wildly inside I could feel you looking at me with desire I could hear your sweet voice echoing in my head I could feel your lips lightly touching mine I could smell your flesh as you moved closer I could see your smile as you leaned in I could feel the warmth of your touch I could feel your breath upon my neck I could see your eyes and their spark I could see them in the night like a star I could feel your heart beating as you held me I could feel the strength in your tender touch I could feel the safety in you arms as you pulled me close I could see the man I desired before me yet, I could see your silhouette and nothing more You were but just a dream You were so far out of my reach You were what I knew I deserved You were what I have always yearned for You were there always in my dreams, haunting me You seemed real but in reality you were not Today I have finally opened my eyes Today I see you standing before me Today I hear your sweet soft voice in my ear Today I know the taste of your lips Today I know the sound of your racing heart Today I can still smell your flesh as we laid tangled together Today your smile makes me smile from deep inside Today your touch sends little fires racing through my entire being Today your warm breath ignites desires deep inside of me Today your eyes shine bright like the warm sun when I look into them Today I feel whole and complete Today I feel like a woman Today I feel desired Today I feel beautiful Today I feel as though I am still dreaming Today I know that I am truly alive Today I finally know what making love really is Today I know how amazing you are All of this because of you All of this because you are no longer a dream All of this because I know that you are real All of this because you found me All of this because you finally woke me from my dreams You are no longer a dream, as I have opened my eyes You are here no longer out of my reach You are now here to hold my hand Journey 4/19/2014 |
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BNJ......it's beautiful, deep and full of feeling
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Thank you gibbs
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Good that you now feel that special way
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Yes I believe so.
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Thank you kc
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. journey. I am at a loss for words..
. your thoughts your words are more beautiful than this.... |
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.. sorry that pic is a little big...
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Thank you so much no1
These words came from deep inside of me. |
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Wow. So beautiful.
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Edited by
BrandNewJourney
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Fri 04/25/14 07:16 AM
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Thank you dreamer
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Fri 04/25/14 07:46 AM
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Hey, NewJourney,
I liked this piece of yours very, very much. Was deep enough so. You spoke from a real inner wealth of feelings and I could feel them, this not from a typical male's point of view, but rather from an 'anybody' reader's standpoint. This was full of feelings. I tell you this, you keep writing this type of work and you'll do alright here inside this fecked up world in which we, all, so most uncomfortably dwell. Well done, NewJourney, well done. tommy boy moran / Ireland === |
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Edited by
BrandNewJourney
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Fri 04/25/14 08:02 AM
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Thank you tommyboy
It had been many, many, many years since I had written anything like this. Many, many, many, many years since anyone had aroused in me the need or want to write anything like this. My emotions, my feelings, my thoughts, and someone special brought forth the need to write this poem. I felt the need to get it down on paper where it could be heard. Where the emotions I felt inside could be seen clearly at any time. So that on my darkest days the inner feelings were visible through the dark clouds |
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This afternoon I sit beneath this Maple tree reflecting back on what brought these words to me.
Life has always found a way to knock me down it seems. It may take me a while to get back on my feet sometimes. Through clearer eyes I can still see the beauty that was given to me. Today I stand stronger and ready for whatever life decides to throw at me. |
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As beautiful as you are
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Thank you so much (((PKH)))
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Wow, this is so sweet ,I must confers you're good
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wonderful!
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