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Topic: ~Dreams of You~
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Mon 05/12/14 01:40 PM
Thank you Juny & tazz flowerforyou

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Tue 05/13/14 01:35 AM
Wow..very touchy! Wish i could say those words proudly. Anyway, i like this ;)

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Tue 05/13/14 07:43 PM
Edited by dnmuxo on Tue 05/13/14 08:03 PM
It is one thing to feel, another to create. It is a miracle to be able to do both. I love this poem. I tried to send you a message but your profile blocked me. I must be too old. But anyway, what a beautiful creation. Please keep it up.

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Tue 05/13/14 11:13 PM
It all happened so fast...
You saved me from my Past...
You swept me off my feet..
and you were so very sweet...


I Ached for more..
my body tingled
and my heart raced..
'my eyes dilated
I ached for more...'


My friend, lover,
please do not leave
I will do anything...
your smell is still in the pillow...
I will do anything...

this is not fair...
I was walking on air...
you had me believing
you had me convinced
this is not fair....

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Tue 05/13/14 11:16 PM
Edited by BrandNewJourney on Tue 05/13/14 11:20 PM
Rose, you should make a new thread for your poem so everyone can see it easier flowerforyou

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Tue 05/13/14 11:18 PM

Wow..very touchy! Wish i could say those words proudly. Anyway, i like this ;)


Thank you flowerforyou

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Tue 05/13/14 11:20 PM

It is one thing to feel, another to create. It is a miracle to be able to do both. I love this poem. I tried to send you a message but your profile blocked me. I must be too old. But anyway, what a beautiful creation. Please keep it up.


Thank you flowerforyou
Yes, sorry I do have some filters on my mail.

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Tue 05/13/14 11:40 PM
really you like it.. thank you.. I love to write poems.. but only to
self...I dont know how to make a new thread? im new at all this...

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Tue 05/13/14 11:51 PM

really you like it.. thank you.. I love to write poems.. but only to
self...I dont know how to make a new thread? im new at all this...



Go to the poems and creative writing section. Look at the top. There should be a post topic button on the right.

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Wed 05/14/14 12:12 AM
ok thanks...laugh

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Wed 05/14/14 07:59 AM

ok thanks...laugh


You are welcome flowerforyou

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Mon 05/19/14 08:35 AM
An amazingly beautiful write. Such depth and description of feeling. The first half is where I find myself in my own experiences, and the second half is where I still look forward to. Thank you so much for sharing =^)

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Mon 05/19/14 08:38 AM
Thank you Poet flowerforyou

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Wed 05/21/14 11:40 AM
flowerforyou
Woah so realistic image putting in my eyes ... Beautiful and deep inside ... I Love this ...really

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Wed 05/21/14 11:45 AM
Thank you Vimal flowerforyou

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