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Thank you Juny & tazz
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Wow..very touchy! Wish i could say those words proudly. Anyway, i like this ;)
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Edited by
dnmuxo
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Tue 05/13/14 08:03 PM
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It is one thing to feel, another to create. It is a miracle to be able to do both. I love this poem. I tried to send you a message but your profile blocked me. I must be too old. But anyway, what a beautiful creation. Please keep it up.
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It all happened so fast...
You saved me from my Past... You swept me off my feet.. and you were so very sweet... I Ached for more.. my body tingled and my heart raced.. 'my eyes dilated I ached for more...' My friend, lover, please do not leave I will do anything... your smell is still in the pillow... I will do anything... this is not fair... I was walking on air... you had me believing you had me convinced this is not fair.... |
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Edited by
BrandNewJourney
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Tue 05/13/14 11:20 PM
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Rose, you should make a new thread for your poem so everyone can see it easier
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Wow..very touchy! Wish i could say those words proudly. Anyway, i like this ;) Thank you |
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It is one thing to feel, another to create. It is a miracle to be able to do both. I love this poem. I tried to send you a message but your profile blocked me. I must be too old. But anyway, what a beautiful creation. Please keep it up. Thank you Yes, sorry I do have some filters on my mail. |
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really you like it.. thank you.. I love to write poems.. but only to
self...I dont know how to make a new thread? im new at all this... |
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really you like it.. thank you.. I love to write poems.. but only to self...I dont know how to make a new thread? im new at all this... Go to the poems and creative writing section. Look at the top. There should be a post topic button on the right. |
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ok thanks...
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ok thanks... You are welcome |
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An amazingly beautiful write. Such depth and description of feeling. The first half is where I find myself in my own experiences, and the second half is where I still look forward to. Thank you so much for sharing =^)
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Thank you Poet
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Woah so realistic image putting in my eyes ... Beautiful and deep inside ... I Love this ...really |
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Thank you Vimal
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