Topic: one night
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Sun 09/16/07 12:00 PM
okay i wrote this after i had a dream about it last night. its different for me but it was a good dream. so tell me what you think

She came home and there were rose petals on the stairs leading up to her door where there hangin on the door was an envelop.
She took the envelop down and opened it inside was a note and a key card. The note said Marriot hotel room 206 for a night of pure fantasy and pleasure. Dont worry everythings taken care of.
she thought about it for a minute then decided why not it could be fun and it is the marriot. So she got in her car and drove to the marriot. she went up to the room door where there was rose petals on the floor again.On the door was another note. she opened it all it said was "feel free to leave at anytime all you have to do is say stop" she looked around noone there so she opened the door with the keycard. The smell of roses was strong in the air. and the glow in the room was warm and inviting. There before her was a large den with candles burning and vases of roses all around. She thought to her self wow this room must have cost a fortune. On the floor was another trail of rose petals leading up to a landing where there was a hottub with petal floating in it. A bottle of champagne was on ice with a single glass setting beside it. and a note. She picked up the note it read "enjoy a nice warm bath." thats all it said. She looked around and saw a cd player sittin beside a robe she hit play on it and soft erotic music started playing. She decided what the hell got undressed and stepped into the tub. the water was hot and the petals gave the water a nice rose aroma. she lay there relaxing and slowly closed her eyes enjoying the smell and the feel of the hot water caressing her body. It was so relaxing she almost fell asleep then the music stopped. she jerked up to grap her clothes but they were gone. she looked around noone was there. She grabbed the robe and as she went to put it on a note fell out of it. she picked it up it simply read "across the den" She looked up to see across the den was a door only a quarter of the way open with a soft glow coming from the room. She tied the robe and walked across the den and slowly opened the door.there was a large bed directly in front of her candles lit the room the smell of roses everywhere and soft music playing in the background. On the bed was two envelops and her clothes and a soft silky black blind fold. ontop her clothes the envelop said stop. on top the blindfold the envelop said proceed. she picked up the one ontop her clothes and opened it. it read "there is a note for you at the front counter hope you enjoyed the relaxing bath" She layed it down and picked up the other note it read "place the blindfold on your eyes and please lie down on the bed relax you will enjoy and you can say stop at anytime. i only ask you not remove the blindfold." She figured i came this far why not go all the way. so she placed the blindfold on her eyes and lay on the bed. as soon as her head hit the pillow she heard a wisper say dont worry___________ everything is gonna be okay. she knew the voice it was relaxing and soothing someone she knew but couldnt place who it was. this actually made her relax it is someone i know but who?
then she felt something soft touching her nose and then the smell hit her it was a rose. she could feel its softness running down her neck as her robe slowly opened. She felt really nervous now then nice warm hands started touching her and slowly rubbing her and that voice whispered its okay just enjoy the moment. the rose she could feel making its way down her body giving her chills as it slowly twirled on her skin and then a soft warm tongue touched her already hard nipples it felt so good and so erotic it made her shake with pleasure. the kissing soon started and oh did he really know how to kiss and where to kiss. then she felt him making his way down her body kissing and licking every inch of her bare skin.then he started kissing and licking her clit and then softly sucked on it she could tell he knew what he was doing for it wasnt long before he had her ready to explode with passion. her eyes she could feel rolling back her neck and back arched. her skin was so hot and the feeling was so intense and with a final thrust of his tongue inside her she felt herself let go. the passion sprung from her and she could feel it running down between her legs. Her orgasm seemed to be non stop so intense she finally had to reach and push his head back she couldnt take anymore. she felt him get off the bed. but soon just as she relaxed she felt a rose touch her skin again it sent chills all thru her. she lay there breathing very heavily and wondering what would happen next. Then the music stopped she lay waitin in the silence but she could hear nothing. so she sat up and slowly took off the blind fold. there laying beside her was a single rose and a note. the note read "enjoy the room it is yours for the night." she jumped up closed her robe and turned on all the lights methodically searching thru the room. on the coffee table in the den was the second keycard setting under a freshly poored glass of champagne. she sat on the couch took a drink and wondered who was that and why havent i been out with him before. she soon found herself back in the hottub relaxing and enjoying the peace and quite. and everynow and again getting aroused at the thought of what had just happened to her. She made her way out of the hottub blew out all the candles and went a lay on the bed. suddenly as if it were only seconds that had passed the phone rang. it was the frontdesk telling her it was her 10 am wakeup call. She got up put on her clothes and went to the front desk. She said i would like to check out of room 206 the manager said thank you ms.__________ for staying with us i hope the room met all your needs. Did you sleep well. she looked at him and said how did you know my name. He said the reservation was made in your name and your friend picked up the room keys yesterday. She asked what was my friends name. He looked puzzled sorry ma'am i didnt catch his name. He just payed for the room took the keys and left. She was afraid to ask more. so she got in her car and drove home. the rose petals were gone from her steps but there was a note on the door. It simply said "thank you"

DancerOnTheWynd's photo
Sun 09/16/07 12:12 PM
wow.....i have goosebumps after reading this...

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Sun 09/16/07 12:16 PM
ty thats the kind of reaction i like

Katertots37's photo
Sun 09/16/07 12:18 PM
oh wow covington..what a dream that would be. Just reading that made my heart race....maybe one day that might happen for you.

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Sun 09/16/07 12:33 PM
ty kater its only a dream i could never get that in real life

Katertots37's photo
Sun 09/16/07 12:35 PM
you sound like me hun, it only happens in dreams and that's all i live for.

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Sun 09/16/07 12:40 PM
WOW!.....

pms64's photo
Sun 09/16/07 12:48 PM
Wish I had dreams like his.
sad sad
PMS

Katertots37's photo
Sun 09/16/07 01:02 PM
i do have dreams like that..not as good but good enough but that's all they are....dreams

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Sun 09/16/07 01:56 PM
well focus on the person in that dream then try to find that person in real life i believe dreams are a window into the future or past you just have to look hard to find the meaning sometimes.

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Sun 09/16/07 02:01 PM
Awesome covington what a dreambigsmile

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Sun 09/16/07 02:02 PM
Incredible Dream flowerforyou

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Sun 09/16/07 02:47 PM
ty but dreams like that make for hard mornings lol

LAMom's photo
Sun 09/16/07 02:52 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww yes they do laugh

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Sun 09/16/07 09:02 PM
but i still enjoyed the dream

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Tue 09/18/07 03:32 AM
awesome dreamflowerforyou