Topic: and then I write
jimz's photo
Sat 09/15/07 10:54 AM
by the wayside
of a swamp

in the bottom
of the earth

inside the soul
of a starving lion

on top of a
jagged cliff

hanging on
with my sore tongue
stuck to the moon

over a cloud
shaped like fangs
digging into the back
of god

inside a fire
in the castle
of evil

swimming
in the blood
dripping from
a hype

my eyes
on a blade
of a knife

towards a
splintered
wooden casket

before a
dropped body
rom heaven

I walk with
crooked arms
bent
over my head

I swing my pen
with melted wax
from broken legs

I dream of angels
in heat

I dream of my
rabid mouth
kissing hell

I whisper
a scream into my
crowded soul

I sing hymns
of a spinning
choir
on the wheels
of a torn
eternity

and then I
write



LAMom's photo
Sat 09/15/07 10:56 AM
(((( Jim ))))

My soul has been touched flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sat 09/15/07 10:59 AM
it doesn't take long for my muse to make my day, me and bobby d. need our mamma souls when we're knocking on heaven's door

LAMom's photo
Sat 09/15/07 11:01 AM
<<<<<<<<<<<<< sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Blessed am I to have you in my life,,, Our paths have crossed forever am I touched

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 09/15/07 11:10 AM
flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 09/15/07 07:53 PM
very touching indeed flowerforyou

SisterShaman's photo
Sat 09/15/07 09:26 PM
I keep reading up to "hanging on/with my sore tongue/stuck to the moon," and just stopping there. I love the over all piece, but that line is just awesome!:heart:

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 09/15/07 09:30 PM
I was thinking the same thing about that line!!!


I love it! flowerforyou

Jess642's photo
Sat 09/15/07 09:31 PM
"I swing my pen
with melted wax
from broken legs'


phenomenal...

awestruck.

flowerforyou Thankyou.

summerlady's photo
Sat 09/15/07 10:07 PM
Beautiful work! flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 09/16/07 10:39 AM
thank you all for replying, y'all my, my my inspiration and so much more