Fleeting Moment of Forever

Though
it was just a fleeting moment
I could see her
not the her a mere few seconds could discern
but the her
a thousand tears could feel

I want to say
she was lonely
standing by the window as if she were waiting
for the rain to find its ending
but that wasn’t it
it was deeper
more like she was tired of having to hurdle
a thousand standing puddles
each filled with
drowning city lights
and each
waiting to drown her light

Her reluctance
to walk out into the pain
to face the depths of what a day had brought
painted her a color of sorrow
and that’s the her I saw
and will see for forever

Wow.........

Don't ever doubt your talent!!!!

Cause, only someone with talent can write something that makes someone else go, "Wow!"

:-)

mig25....a thousand standing puddles.....lovely write.

nicely done mig...

Very nice, really enjoyed.