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Topic: ~ i loved you, first
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 02/01/14 07:42 AM
i spin a fine gauze of words around you you rip the gauze to shreds when i see blood i see red you see red, always you say you love me yet i loved you, first author's note....a creative piece, only.

Geo137 Joined Wed 03/21/12 Posts: 4	Sat 02/01/14 08:17 AM
Lovely poem x

Tulip1969 Joined Wed 11/06/13 Posts: 48	Sat 02/01/14 08:38 AM
Lovely... smiles

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Sat 02/01/14 10:11 AM
Brilliant. Complete and compact. I miss your words. A truly exceptional poem.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 02/01/14 01:57 PM
Geo137..... kind sir... Tulip1969....kind lady... plastic_pancakes....sweet words for me.. thankyou!

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Sat 02/01/14 04:42 PM
WOW! well done, well done.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 02/02/14 08:08 AM
PacificStar48....thankyou!

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Mon 02/03/14 01:07 AM
teasing, nicely done however. tommy boy moran / Ireland ===

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 02/03/14 04:28 PM
tommyboy....... thankYOU for reading.

JMDPA1965 Joined Sat 02/08/14 Posts: 495	Mon 02/10/14 07:08 PM
That was wonderful,

Sequa Joined Mon 01/13/14 Posts: 21	Mon 02/10/14 07:33 PM
interesting poem

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Mon 02/10/14 08:00 PM
i spin a fine gauze of words around you you rip the gauze to shreds when i see blood i see red you see red, always you say you love me yet i loved you, first author's note....a creative piece, only. I really wish I had that kind of creativity!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 02/11/14 04:09 PM
Jm...your words warm me. Sequa...interesting is...good mig...you are very generous!

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