Looking for some feedback

You say that you love to write, so surely you can write more than that? Don't make it too long but try to get your personality across.

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I just figured if there was a lot to read no one would read it! And if I sparked an interest then we could talk... Idk I guess I can put a little more

I agree with Crystal and Tawt surprisingly. If a girl doesn't have much written in her profile I tend to move on. If they are looking at your profile its because you already peaked their interest, they want to know you a little better. Plus if you write more about yourself they will have more to say too you if they decide to write you.

What everyone else said. Even if you want to leave some things to the imagination in order to have a conversation, you still have to give women a reason to want to talk to you, otherwise, you might get a few emails that say "hi" and nothing else, and then you really have nothing to talk about. You don't have to write a novel on your profile, but just enough to get women interested, so the emails will start and continue a oonversation.

Also, you might want to post your writings in the poetry section here, that's a great way to get noticed. Good luck.