I have been on and off of these sites for a couple of years and just do not get alot of response. So come on give it to me straight..

You need more photos. I'd get rid of the one with the photoshopped butterfly on it, it looks too cutesy and fake.

You don't say what kind of guy you're looking for, other than the fact that if they don't like your job requirements they shouldn't contact you (which is rather negative)

Good luck to you, I suggest participating in the forums, you might have more luck meeting people with similar interests.

Hi, hon! You an attractive woman, but if I had to pin point your issue, I'm thinking you may need more photos and maybe take out the mention of working every weekend and holidays. You know men are a little fragil ego wise. He doesn't expect you to quit your job, but they like the illusion that you would if it came down to it

Good Luck, fellow Mingler!

I think it's friendly & inviting :)

TEEN AT HOME IS A BIG NEGATIVE TO MOST MEN,WE ARE NOT LOOKING FOR MORE PROBLEMS,YOU MIGHT DO BETTER TO BE QUIT ABOUT THAT AT FIRST--NEXT YOUR JOB--MOST GUYS WORK DURING THE WEEK AND THEY ARE LIVING FOR THE WEEKENDS---THATS IT EVERYTHING ELSE IS GOOD--

Try removing some of those restrictions i.e. 40 to 60 years olds only. What's the matter, afraid you won't be able to keep up with a young buck?

Your text is killing this profile.

Being in sales would you tell a customer every reason you thought of why not to buy a product, walk away, and not even ask to close the sale? Don't think so.

You Sell a product, in this case you as a fun date, as being in stock, available, and every aspect of it as a positive, and a benefit to the customer. Then you invite them to buy by inviting them to answer a upbeat question? Checking your mail often.

Your in sales Look at your picture. Look at the body language? Would you approach a customer with that "block" don't touch me arm between you and them? Or would you want to see them actually turn and engage you with eye to eye smile. Come on you are not a teenager you don't want something to show in a photo use photo shop in a way that makes you look grown or get some better pics. It is the holidays you can get a single great full length photo for less than five bucks at any number of photo discount studios. Crop the head and shoulders for your leadshot icon and put the other with snaps on down. One photo just screams "out of date" especially when it is out of season.

Well well I thought this should be a " who you are" type of site, not a critics corner, and may i ask..... Why the essay for critiquing? To everyone be who you are and do what you do on here, you are who you are do NOT let anyone change you its your persona..... Leave it be critics we don't want someone on here taking advice from 200 people, next thing you know the person does not know who they are because they took someones advice on how they should be. Be yourself!

Profile is fine.... Its who you are ;)

Asking minglers to rate a profile is one sure way of knowing what it is that's amiss with a profile!
You don't like the feedback,you don't ask...
The lady asked,minglers responded! Deal with it!

Not bad,but please,more photos will do the trick! Work,work,work,means,no time for you or the person you looking for-or your teenager for that matter!

Goodluck to you!

Nah. Keep those restrictions. Saves you from having to deal with immaturity.

I see only one problem. You live too far away from me.