Topic: The Happy Poem
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Sun 10/22/06 09:21 AM
why is he here/why did he return
walk through the fire/this time get burned
listen up son/only then you will learn
I live a life of changes.and to never your concern
Love sometimes happens/but waiting on a throne
doesn't christen you a ruler/to claim lt as your own
I leave you no charge of my motives/this will I make
alone/i'll commit to what i damn well please/and on with our lives we
go/we don't seek your godly permission/I was
born to break the rules/kiss me if you dont like me/for
anger is my fuel/i swear by all things that my life's in
my command/by the air and the water/by the fire and the land
and if i'm a dreamer of dreams/then there i remain/to learn
to accept my values/and wish you all the same

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Sun 10/22/06 09:26 AM
Good rhyme Jt WILL

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/22/06 09:27 AM
Eeeeeew nothing like a Knight in Shinning Armor
to wisk his lady away!

michael1313's photo
Sun 10/22/06 09:33 AM
You say that your love is strong,to be chearished and not owned,
what happened to your kingdom?you're th one who was De-throned.

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Sun 10/22/06 09:36 AM
do I sense some enmity??? WILL

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Sun 10/22/06 09:40 AM
Hummm guess that depends for if the
Knight has the lady is that being
de-throned? If so who wants that castle?
It is kinda lonely with out someone to
share in the riches.

michael1313's photo
Sun 10/22/06 09:51 AM
My love is strong,as I stand tall...
showing all th world,and forsaking all...
I will not be taken,as just another fool,
my words I write with wisdom,not just another tool...
hear my voice,feel my cries,,,
My love will always be there,soaring in th skies...
you cannot make me fail,you will not make me fall,,,
my Love for her,will always be,she's th one who makes me tall.

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Sun 10/22/06 09:54 AM
oh for christs sake knock it off
this isnt poetrybattle.com

michael1313's photo
Sun 10/22/06 09:59 AM
If you can't stand th heat,,,get out of th kitchen,,,
I write for Love,I'm not here just Bitchin'...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/22/06 10:54 AM
Hummm, there is a difference in writing
for love. For if you write for love and
the love is returned is one thing but when
you write for love and the love is not
returned then it's time to walk away.

How did that saying go if you let it go
free and it comes back to you then
it always belonged to you. But if you set
it free and it does not return then it
never really belonged to you.


So whom ever the lady is with, that is
her choice not yours too make and let
it be. For she was not meant to be with
you. So be a man and walk away.

michael1313's photo
Sun 10/22/06 11:38 AM
This I must,but cannot do,my Love still srong,still holds true,
We all need Love,to help us feel,that our search is not, just a spinning
wheel,
th chains are tight,that hold me bound,
I know my Love will soon be found,
it is up to her,not you to say,
for if she does not love me,
only then,will I just go away...

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 10/22/06 12:53 PM
there is poerty and music
that sings from my heart
to hold it in would be such a shame
the day has begun and now I will start
finally I have slept
noone to blame but myself
no, this was not all a game,
but it is now over...
please walk away...

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Sun 10/22/06 12:58 PM
Nice you guys should do that more often if you werent so opposed to one
another that could be lines of a play about broken hearts..WILL

michael1313's photo
Sun 10/22/06 01:09 PM
fare well lost love, for I must go,you left my heart in a throw,
she told me to, so now I go...