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teasingbrunette · 2013-11-12T10:38:01-08:00

my time as a flower I may only last an hour my life as a heart lies between whole and apart

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teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 11/12/13 10:38 AM
my time as a flower I may only last an hour my life as a heart lies between whole and apart

paintecards01 Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 4725	Tue 11/12/13 10:43 AM
That's lovely.

eric503 Joined Fri 10/25/13 Posts: 150	Tue 11/12/13 06:54 PM
All i see is (rEd) Blood shed I think i need some pills cuz i take to the dead Every one talking ain"t talking about sh#t Let it rain blood. Let the heaven feel the my strife like a knife to a windpipe Thats when the devil strikes Mama side they be day like this well every day like this ,a aim,but i miss,lest i try for it, ....

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 11/15/13 08:04 AM
paintedecards.....thankyou,kindly eric....nice to see you here.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1546	Fri 11/15/13 06:37 PM
Ah teasing another beautiful piece. Love your work

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 11/16/13 10:42 AM
mig25...your comment made me smile,thankyou....I always read you.

JRonin Joined Sun 06/09/13 Posts: 376	Sat 11/16/13 06:01 PM
short, but very sweet. Good work.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 11/16/13 07:23 PM
JRonin....I appreciate your comments,truly.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 12/14/13 12:11 AM
Loving your short 'say it all' writes TB...