I'm looking for feedback. I very new at this.

Must say I find it difficult to rate your text.
I'd start with the bit about yourself, then post the section on what you're looking for.
I find the section what you're looking for difficult to rate.
I don't like it, I'd rephrase it, but that could be personal. To me it feels very claiming, as if you want to put a woman on a pedestal, in a straight-jacket. It makes me want to run away, and very fast at that!

So in that sense I'd say: rephrase, make it shorter and a bit less heavy to digest (less claiming).

Your English doesn't make me feel you're a native speaker, reading that statement made me raise my eye-browzzz. Even if you've been speaking German a lot, a native speaker should still get the basic things right.
Now who am I to say you're not American, but for me a lot of ??????? come up, sorry.

Good luck here!

Welcome to Mingle2..nice profile.

Actually, I believe your profile is just fine, except maybe I would probably suggest you could mention more of the type of person you are and the interests you have. Welcome to Mingle2! Best wishes for success!

Have not had many girls talken to me yet plz help
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You have explained very well what you want in a woman and how you would support her and love her unconditionally. Your profile is based on deep feelings that come from a loving heart. This may all be too much too soon!
Perhaps you could add a little about what you do for fun and excitement. What makes you smile or laugh out loud! Just a bit about the normal everyday you!

Best of luck to you!

I really think your profile looks great now. You gave more of your interests and described who you are. Great job! Again, best wishes to you!

Welcome to Mingle.

Your profile is ok for someone new to the whole online thing. Which by the way sounds a little unbelievable now days even if it isn't.

Think you actually invested some time putting yourself out there which gives you some credit.

Think you would do better with the second paragraph first and then a less intense shorter version of the first as a second. Then an upbeat close that suggests you know it is a process and an interest of two for a nice conversation.

You give me the vibe that you are more than ready to have a mate in your life and as a Christian Dad you want to get across it might be about good values. Important not to make your profile sound like it came out of a marriage retreat manual.

Three pictures give a good little mini story about you. I think a smiling lead shot with no shades on your forehead and at least a shirt collar showing will engage more interest.

Good luck.

I like the profile. You sound very intelligent n know what you want. It is a bit drawn out. Worry that someone may pass it up because it's too much at once. Great pics good looking family!

Rate me 2, thanks!

It's a good profile Ivnadream ... You're a good looking man, so a few more pics would be nice ....Welcome to Mingle!, luck, love, and happiness!!

You need more photos so people can see what you look like; the side view pic is artsy but not very informative.