Topic: whatever ya wanna call it
purplecat's photo
Sat 09/01/07 10:32 PM
I wish I could shut it off ........ turn it to stone , the pain of being alone.
If only I could snuff it out ..... dampen the flame that singes me so.
let it go..........
cant stop the darkness thats blinding me ..... in my room its to dark ,
and noone is finding me....
shackled to the wall by fear , cold and dark ...
theres noone near....
sealed inside my box I loom ,
why could I never find my groom?
left with a bitter taste of something sweet , never found as I retreat..
here no sound of approaching feet ....
lost within I feel defeat...
the air it smells of bitter cold , as I sit and inward fold ..
curling up , furling tight .... black forever and ever night ..
I've lost my sight ...
no more do I want to see , the pain that washes over me.....
the dreams I had but never did see.....
the lonely world that swallowed me.sick

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Sat 09/01/07 11:00 PM
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s1owhand's photo
Sat 09/01/07 11:13 PM
lonely we are all in our own ways, but, never alone
pcat flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 09/01/07 11:20 PM
wow purple..awesome:smile:

pkh's photo
Sun 09/02/07 01:04 AM
Really good,I feel that pain alot myself.Keep writting I really enjoy your work.flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 09/02/07 04:30 AM
Been there done that, after I hit bottom up was the only way left, and the pains turned to joy and happiness.

glasses flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile

G

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Sun 09/02/07 04:44 AM
Great writing, you are very creative.

zanne46's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:01 AM
I think we all need to plan a date and a place and meet....

then we would have a day, or 2 or 3...that we wouldn't be alone....

:heart: flowerforyou

oldsage's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:20 AM
Zanne, we are talking about doing that nxt July here at my place. Keep your calander open, going to try & make this one happen.

HillFolk's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:42 AM
That is an incredible poem and so real to life.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 09/02/07 07:03 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Purple...

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Sun 09/02/07 07:28 AM
hi ya purple!!flowerforyou drinker smokin

frankfk's photo
Sun 09/02/07 08:12 AM
no one is alone, if u are, ur thoughts are there to become ur friendsflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 09/02/07 06:20 PM
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