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I wish I could shut it off ........ turn it to stone , the pain of being alone.
If only I could snuff it out ..... dampen the flame that singes me so. let it go.......... cant stop the darkness thats blinding me ..... in my room its to dark , and noone is finding me.... shackled to the wall by fear , cold and dark ... theres noone near.... sealed inside my box I loom , why could I never find my groom? left with a bitter taste of something sweet , never found as I retreat.. here no sound of approaching feet .... lost within I feel defeat... the air it smells of bitter cold , as I sit and inward fold .. curling up , furling tight .... black forever and ever night .. I've lost my sight ... no more do I want to see , the pain that washes over me..... the dreams I had but never did see..... the lonely world that swallowed me. |
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lonely we are all in our own ways, but, never alone
pcat |
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wow purple..awesome
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Really good,I feel that pain alot myself.Keep writting I really enjoy your work.
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Been there done that, after I hit bottom up was the only way left, and the pains turned to joy and happiness.
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Great writing, you are very creative.
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I think we all need to plan a date and a place and meet....
then we would have a day, or 2 or 3...that we wouldn't be alone.... |
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Zanne, we are talking about doing that nxt July here at my place. Keep your calander open, going to try & make this one happen.
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That is an incredible poem and so real to life.
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Purple... |
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hi ya purple!!
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no one is alone, if u are, ur thoughts are there to become ur friends
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