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my heart can no longer stand loves embrace
to many times broke to feel such a waste i gave you my love my soul and still you left me for a man you already know your beauty wont see he sees only his lust and his manly desire he wont take his time to light you eternal fire Behind closed doors i gave feelings you never felt and in my blue eyes i made your heart truely melt i gave you love that you will never again find from a man who is honest and loving and kind Romance you never wanted but i gave you anyways and in our bed passion would turn hours to days these are the things you said you would keep but in the end my love for you was to deep i gave you these cause as a part of me i must you gave it up for someone else's sexual lust and if you ever think you will find more than this then your mistaken and headed for a lonely abyss so everything i am is exactly what i let you see so my question to you is What is wrong with me this is a poem i wrote a while back so no simphathy needed anymore just thought i would share it with everyone here at jsh |
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Ah covington....beautiful....thanks for sharing
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That's a beautiful poem! I'm glad to hear that you're better now!
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Well it was very nice,but not all women and men are like that
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ty all i have more poems to share if you all would like
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That was beautiful covington and yes please share those others
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Good writing, post when you feel like it. Thats how it works around here. I like it.
G |
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This poem shows that you have artistic talent and there is a real flow to it.
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Very nice writing!
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Nice
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beautifully written....
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Yes Beautifully Written,,
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Truly and Awesome poem indeed very well written words that seem to come back and haunt most of us over and over again.
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It is so refreshing to see men who can write and arent afraid to share their thoughts and feelings...
Excellent poem!!! Keep em coming GEL |
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That's beautiful, Covington.
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