Hey folks new here...is my profile write up fair or too feisty?

You want opinions..been there done that.

your pic contradicts what you say you don't want

It will attract all tha wrong men..like KIK

JK kik is kewl

Sorry...I don't follow ....? My pic is me at a friends fiftieth....I am wearing a strapless dress...how does that equal young men and married men thinking I want a hook up?

Nothing showed up under your name for reply....

That last msg was for kik

WOW!
Its not what I think

Oh nevermind..yo will find out for youtself

Charming for sure

Your profile reads clear on what u want & don't want. I see a lot of skin on ur pic so that may attract an unwanted element. Mebbe that's what Candi meant. Welcome to mingle & the threads amazon :)

Thank you journeyman236 for being clear.....thank u for being fair....the pic is cropped funny...not good at this online date site pic thing

I missed that so I only know what I read & see. Just know that if you ask for opinions on here, you'll get many & u know what they say about opinions..

I was giving my honest opinion..[chill] people here know me..I'm not being intentonally rude..I had innocent pics up with a bit of cleavage showing. Hard to believe but I was shocked at the comments I got over them

actually I am quite alkaline

Great profile and Pics! Good luck!

Please take time to read the forum rules aimed at this forum.

Thank you,
Kim

Thank you BellaV....truly appreciated :)

Hi amazon362937,

Good profile. The text is clear and descriptive, if a little brief, and I like how the photo is well lit and you're smiling and well dressed. I wish the photo wasn't so blurry, but it's clear that it was just resized and cropped. You still look great.

The only other suggestion I could make would be to make your profile text a little more positive. Starting out with a list of things you don't like makes you seem angry and negative. Maybe hurt. You might have reasons to be defensive, but in your profile, instead of listing things you don't want, you could emphasize things you DO want. For example, saying you don't want to be a notch in somebody's belt, and NO MARRIED MEN, you could phrase it like you're looking for a "committed relationship with a SINGLE man." Just an idea. The gentlemen who fit probably won't mind, either way. You're attractive, and you didn't go overboard. At least you end with a smile emoticon. Good job!

Good luck!

Hi Mortman,
Thank you so much for such a fantastic critique!...Loved all you said and I have to agree my tone is probably negative and yes speaks to my issues about men and their sometimes hurtful behaviour. Having said that...that is NOT all I am about. I am actually a sweetheart and that is not coming across as much as it could. Point well taken....I will edit accordingly and hope I have a great experience on this site...fingers crossed :)

I agree with Mortman. Sure you can have negative experiences in life, don't we all. But to lavish them upon potential new partner/dates ...
Positive ppl attract positive ppl

I don't think the pic does you credit. Your face is great, nice smile etc. but the fleshy bit looks odd.

Anyway, good luck!

If the law of attraction still subsists,red light street attire would attract junk men to you.Your smile is great anyway!

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