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Topic: Among the sheets (more erotic poetry)
JRonin's photo
Mon 09/30/13 11:06 PM
Edited by JRonin on Mon 09/30/13 11:16 PM
Post-coital euphoria hits

we lay on our backs staring at the ceiling

flushed

perspiring

replete

and desiring more

I turn my head to you

our eyes lock as we catch our breath

your leg is wrapped in mine

my arm touches your back

fingers playing on your slender spinal column

making you tingle slightly

you couldnt keep the smile

off your face

if you tried

and you don't want to.

You close your eyes and breathe

taking in my manly scent

as i take in your matted hair

covered in sweat

your exquisite body glistening.

you have never looked more radiant

in the coming sunrise of the morning

the minutes tick by and we stay in this position

wordless and quiet

yet no words need be spoken

until you move your mouth to mine

kiss my lips in a fervent soft passion

making me breathless once again,

and utter the phrase

"do it all over again."

we spend the time following your excellent advice

as the morning suns shines in the sky

as your moans of ecstacy heighten with

every kiss, every breath, every stroke of my fingertips

tingling on your nude skin

soon you are unable to keep still

shaking

trembling

quivering

eyes squeezed shut

mouth parted and gasping every few seconds

your glowing again

heaven has arived and you greet it with

a sensual fervor that

curls your toes,

tenses every muscle

and warms you to the core

vibrating you for what seems to go on for

minutes on end!

This is the time we spend together

and just when you think you've had enough

I lay you on your back

and duck under the blankets

and work at parts below

making your eyes widen,

making you fist the sheets again

and reminding you

of that divine place where

only sensual angels tread and float.

Among the attraction,

among two people,

among the sheets

I take you.

And for just this night and morning, your dreams are made real

for however long you dare to stay with me tonight.


(Thanks for reading. Please leave a comment or two)

pkh's photo
Tue 10/01/13 06:02 AM
Lovely a pleasure to read you again

JRonin's photo
Tue 10/01/13 06:17 AM

Lovely a pleasure to read you again


The pleasure is mine, as well. always good to share my words with the world and get positive feedback.

threepurpleroses's photo
Tue 10/01/13 09:32 AM
flowerforyou Sensual, exciting, everything a poem should be!flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 10/01/13 09:47 AM
Breathless! smitten

no photo
Tue 10/01/13 09:50 AM
well just RAWR..loved it.drinker flowers

JRonin's photo
Tue 10/01/13 08:48 PM
tell your friends, i could use the praise to boost my ego flowerforyou

JRonin's photo
Sun 10/20/13 07:50 AM
adding to my repertoire of writings at least once a week or every few days. Thanks for all the feedback guys, I really enjoy it. drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/20/13 08:20 AM
Wow is it hot in here or is it just me....Think I need a cigarette after reading that one and I don't smoke anymore...Your words capture the soul and lets the mind wonder~~~~:thumbsup:

dcastelmissy's photo
Sun 10/20/13 08:54 AM

Wow is it hot in here or is it just me....Think I need a cigarette after reading that one and I don't smoke anymore...Your words capture the soul and lets the mind wonder~~~~:thumbsup:


Absolutely exquisite! smokin smokin smokin smokin

JRonin's photo
Sun 10/20/13 06:53 PM
Edited by JRonin on Sun 10/20/13 06:57 PM


Wow is it hot in here or is it just me....Think I need a cigarette after reading that one and I don't smoke anymore...Your words capture the soul and lets the mind wonder~~~~:thumbsup:


Absolutely exquisite! smokin smokin smokin smokin


Some people talk a good game about how they are in bed. I fantasize with my artistic indulgences. :wink:

tenderlove12345's photo
Mon 10/21/13 02:16 PM
Very nice I was there once keep writing


no photo
Mon 10/21/13 05:00 PM
Superb poem... lover's language...Great

no photo
Mon 10/21/13 06:01 PM
Wow! I need a cold shower after reading that!

_Minimunchkin's photo
Tue 10/22/13 03:38 AM
How exotic is that!smitten

JRonin's photo
Tue 10/22/13 07:24 PM
thanks.

slyskyfly's photo
Tue 10/22/13 10:47 PM
that was ..... wow, can't come up wit anything. that good.

JRonin's photo
Wed 10/23/13 12:48 AM

that was ..... wow, can't come up wit anything. that good.


Perhaps you will when inspiration hits, my friend.


4evababy's photo
Wed 10/23/13 04:01 AM
Haha too late for a cold shower for me (blush)

JRonin's photo
Wed 10/23/13 12:43 PM

Haha too late for a cold shower for me (blush)

blushing

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