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Topic: Delusion
Mstry_Grl Joined Sun 08/12/07 Posts: 1486	Mon 08/27/07 04:44 AM
Emptiness is my soul Hollow remorse I feel Darkness in my eyes It’s all very real Obscurity is my song Tumultuous I feast Impressions usually wrong First time we meet Innocence is my air Shrouded seclusion I lay Misconceptions do beware Unintentional I falsely portray

DebbieJo Joined Mon 06/18/07 Posts: 182	Mon 08/27/07 04:48 AM
Very nice Mstry

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 08/27/07 05:02 AM
Enjoy your writtings

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 08/27/07 05:06 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Mon 08/27/07 05:20 AM
good one

yogi5 Joined Mon 06/18/07 Posts: 5	Mon 08/27/07 06:20 AM
comming together is an beginning, working together is progess, but staying together is sucess.. i met you as an stranger, i took you as my friend, i hope we meet soon for heaven can't wait...

Mstry_Grl Joined Sun 08/12/07 Posts: 1486	Mon 08/27/07 06:28 AM
Thank you everyone for your comments.

MIKE4001 Joined Tue 05/29/07 Posts: 2392	Mon 08/27/07 06:38 AM
Very impressive

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 08/27/07 07:08 AM

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