Topic: Hate Love
nep2ra's photo
Wed 08/14/13 04:33 PM
This I love
That I hate
My mind bent beyond elasticity
Seeking for True Satisfaction
You will find Love
Like a man finds water in a scorching desert
Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage

I found you
Now I hate you
Imprisoned by selfish desire
I have come to loathe the love I loved
It's all a farce
The manipulation of chemical reactions
A flash of hormone here and there
With a dash of lust
And maybe the right songs
Or the charming smile and long hair

For me it's over
I now know what I want
It's your body and nothing more
It's selfish I know
Yet it's brutally honest
Yield

oldhippie1952's photo
Wed 08/14/13 10:10 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: Interesting poem.

nep2ra's photo
Thu 08/15/13 06:45 AM
Thank you.:smile:

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Thu 08/15/13 11:26 PM
Good writing!!!
I felt the pain.

Maybe what you want is not what you need?

mig25's photo
Fri 08/16/13 12:37 AM

This I love
That I hate
My mind bent beyond elasticity
Seeking for True Satisfaction
You will find Love
Like a man finds water in a scorching desert
Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage

I found you
Now I hate you
Imprisoned by selfish desire
I have come to loathe the love I loved
It's all a farce
The manipulation of chemical reactions
A flash of hormone here and there
With a dash of lust
And maybe the right songs
Or the charming smile and long hair

For me it's over
I now know what I want
It's your body and nothing more
It's selfish I know
Yet it's brutally honest
Yield


I agree with hippie . . . interesting poem

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 08/16/13 01:54 AM
Lust in the guise of Love is such a letdown. I like how you recognize it for what it is and call a spade a spade. Nice writing

nep2ra's photo
Thu 08/22/13 06:45 AM

Lust in the guise of Love is such a letdown. I like how you recognize it for what it is and call a spade a spade. Nice writing


Thank you for appreciating my writing.

nep2ra's photo
Thu 08/22/13 06:46 AM

Good writing!!!
I felt the pain.

Maybe what you want is not what you need?



Thank you.


Exactly. What I want is not what I need. Maybe?

nep2ra's photo
Thu 08/22/13 06:46 AM
Thanks for the appreciation everyone. :)

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Thu 08/22/13 11:07 PM

This I love
That I hate
My mind bent beyond elasticity
Seeking for True Satisfaction
You will find Love
Like a man finds water in a scorching desert
Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage

I found you
Now I hate you
Imprisoned by selfish desire
I have come to loathe the love I loved
It's all a farce
The manipulation of chemical reactions
A flash of hormone here and there
With a dash of lust
And maybe the right songs
Or the charming smile and long hair

For me it's over
I now know what I want
It's your body and nothing more
It's selfish I know
Yet it's brutally honest
Yield

no photo
Thu 08/22/13 11:08 PM

This I love
That I hate
My mind bent beyond elasticity
Seeking for True Satisfaction
You will find Love
Like a man finds water in a scorching desert
Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage

I found you
Now I hate you
Imprisoned by selfish desire
I have come to loathe the love I loved
It's all a farce
The manipulation of chemical reactions
A flash of hormone here and there
With a dash of lust
And maybe the right songs
Or the charming smile and long hair

For me it's over
I now know what I want
It's your body and nothing more
It's selfish I know
Yet it's brutally honest
Yield

no photo
Thu 08/22/13 11:23 PM
"It's your body & nothing more." Imprisoned thoughts.

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Thu 08/22/13 11:26 PM
flowerforyou

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Fri 08/23/13 03:29 AM
Edited by Cantante85 on Fri 08/23/13 03:31 AM

Lust in the guise of Love is such a letdown. I like how you recognize it for what it is and call a spade a spade. Nice writing


I don`t agree, it depends on the person. Like some people can see patterns in stuff others can`t etc., some people can truly love where others just see sexual desires, practical stuff and so forth. And you have stick with it no matter how though it gets, that`s the thing.

nep2ra's photo
Wed 08/28/13 02:35 PM

"It's your body & nothing more." Imprisoned thoughts.


Imprisoned thoughts maybe...

no photo
Wed 08/28/13 02:53 PM

This I love
That I hate
My mind bent beyond elasticity
Seeking for True Satisfaction
You will find Love
Like a man finds water in a scorching desert
Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage

I found you
Now I hate you
Imprisoned by selfish desire
I have come to loathe the love I loved
It's all a farce
The manipulation of chemical reactions
A flash of hormone here and there
With a dash of lust
And maybe the right songs
Or the charming smile and long hair

For me it's over
I now know what I want
It's your body and nothing more
It's selfish I know
Yet it's brutally honest
Yield


How the hell did I miss this one?shocked ...Love and hate all the anger and passion it made me feel:wink: ..Very nice Nep, very nice!flowers

nep2ra's photo
Thu 08/29/13 01:34 AM


How the hell did I miss this one?shocked ...Love and hate all the anger and passion it made me feel:wink: ..Very nice Nep, very nice!flowers



Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.

no photo
Thu 08/29/13 12:00 PM
Good Day Nep2ra,

A common thread has been interesting. It took me from where I was to a different place. Rather a simple, but nonetheless a real definition of art.

Thank you for sharing.

nep2ra's photo
Thu 08/29/13 02:36 PM

Good Day Nep2ra,

A common thread has been interesting. It took me from where I was to a different place. Rather a simple, but nonetheless a real definition of art.

Thank you for sharing.


Thanks for your kind words homeport101. Glad you liked it.

nep2ra's photo
Sat 08/31/13 07:23 AM
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