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This I love
That I hate My mind bent beyond elasticity Seeking for True Satisfaction You will find Love Like a man finds water in a scorching desert Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage I found you Now I hate you Imprisoned by selfish desire I have come to loathe the love I loved It's all a farce The manipulation of chemical reactions A flash of hormone here and there With a dash of lust And maybe the right songs Or the charming smile and long hair For me it's over I now know what I want It's your body and nothing more It's selfish I know Yet it's brutally honest Yield |
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 Interesting poem.
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Thank you.
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Good writing!!!
I felt the pain. Maybe what you want is not what you need? |
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This I love That I hate My mind bent beyond elasticity Seeking for True Satisfaction You will find Love Like a man finds water in a scorching desert Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage I found you Now I hate you Imprisoned by selfish desire I have come to loathe the love I loved It's all a farce The manipulation of chemical reactions A flash of hormone here and there With a dash of lust And maybe the right songs Or the charming smile and long hair For me it's over I now know what I want It's your body and nothing more It's selfish I know Yet it's brutally honest Yield I agree with hippie . . . interesting poem |
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Lust in the guise of Love is such a letdown. I like how you recognize it for what it is and call a spade a spade. Nice writing
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Lust in the guise of Love is such a letdown. I like how you recognize it for what it is and call a spade a spade. Nice writing Thank you for appreciating my writing. |
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Good writing!!! I felt the pain. Maybe what you want is not what you need? Thank you. Exactly. What I want is not what I need. Maybe? |
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Thanks for the appreciation everyone. :)
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This I love That I hate My mind bent beyond elasticity Seeking for True Satisfaction You will find Love Like a man finds water in a scorching desert Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage I found you Now I hate you Imprisoned by selfish desire I have come to loathe the love I loved It's all a farce The manipulation of chemical reactions A flash of hormone here and there With a dash of lust And maybe the right songs Or the charming smile and long hair For me it's over I now know what I want It's your body and nothing more It's selfish I know Yet it's brutally honest Yield |
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This I love That I hate My mind bent beyond elasticity Seeking for True Satisfaction You will find Love Like a man finds water in a scorching desert Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage I found you Now I hate you Imprisoned by selfish desire I have come to loathe the love I loved It's all a farce The manipulation of chemical reactions A flash of hormone here and there With a dash of lust And maybe the right songs Or the charming smile and long hair For me it's over I now know what I want It's your body and nothing more It's selfish I know Yet it's brutally honest Yield |
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"It's your body & nothing more." Imprisoned thoughts.
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Edited by
Cantante85
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Fri 08/23/13 03:31 AM
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Lust in the guise of Love is such a letdown. I like how you recognize it for what it is and call a spade a spade. Nice writing I don`t agree, it depends on the person. Like some people can see patterns in stuff others can`t etc., some people can truly love where others just see sexual desires, practical stuff and so forth. And you have stick with it no matter how though it gets, that`s the thing. |
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"It's your body & nothing more." Imprisoned thoughts. Imprisoned thoughts maybe... |
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This I love That I hate My mind bent beyond elasticity Seeking for True Satisfaction You will find Love Like a man finds water in a scorching desert Only to discover it's a deceptive mirage I found you Now I hate you Imprisoned by selfish desire I have come to loathe the love I loved It's all a farce The manipulation of chemical reactions A flash of hormone here and there With a dash of lust And maybe the right songs Or the charming smile and long hair For me it's over I now know what I want It's your body and nothing more It's selfish I know Yet it's brutally honest Yield How the hell did I miss this one?  ...Love and hate all the anger and passion it made me feel ..Very nice Nep, very nice!
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How the hell did I miss this one? ...Love and hate all the anger and passion it made me feel ..Very nice Nep, very nice! Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. |
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Good Day Nep2ra,
A common thread has been interesting. It took me from where I was to a different place. Rather a simple, but nonetheless a real definition of art. Thank you for sharing. |
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Good Day Nep2ra, A common thread has been interesting. It took me from where I was to a different place. Rather a simple, but nonetheless a real definition of art. Thank you for sharing. Thanks for your kind words homeport101. Glad you liked it. |
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