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Topic: Hand
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 08/09/13 12:27 PM
Probably my worst, but I needed to clear my mind. ================================================ Hand You have gone and Given me your hand Let me reflect So I understand You mean this heart flutter In my chest Proves you’re the one You’re the best I brush your lips Sweet honey to a bee Reserve them always Just for me I take your hand Firmly in mine We’ll be together For a long time

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 08/09/13 12:29 PM


jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Fri 08/09/13 12:54 PM
If the new lady in your life clears your mind like that.... you two are very lucky. Nice write. I enjoyed this

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 08/09/13 12:55 PM
Awww 2km and jemare you always encourage me, even my bad poetry!

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Fri 08/09/13 01:13 PM
Good stuff !

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 08/09/13 03:05 PM
Enjoyed, very nice

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 08/09/13 03:47 PM
Thank you kik and pkh, I still think it is my most feeble attempt.

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