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is the path i walk cold is the air i breathe sharp are the words of hate heavy is the load i bear shame is the claok i wear dark,cold,sharp heavy shame darkens my every dream freezes my every thought sharpens my every need weighs on my every deed cruel are the wounds that bleed damning the judgements of me leaden are the skies above mocking are the things I seek laughter is the thanks i recieve cruel,damning,leaden mocking laughter pain my only friend punitive my reward heavy my every thought derision my applause light is the touch love lost is a soul alone bitter is the drink of life sad is a story told dream is a faded scene light,lost,bitter sad dream soft my lonely sighs spent my energies stinging my tears fall sorrow my daily meal a long dark lonely road is all that faces me |
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Very moving hanged...
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INTENCE.........
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nothing that a trip to Hawaii or mexico won't cure!!!
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((((( Larry)))))
The road of life we are on sometimes seems dark and lonely,, in these times we heal and within ones healing life is reborn, you my friend have an incredible soul a soul full of hope, love and everlasting life,,, Your words once again have left me in Awe,, Amazing |
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intense dark emotions
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..antidepressants..dark personalities are passe my friend!
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"NO MATTER WHAT, THERE IS A LIGHT BY THE END OF THE TUNNEL"
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very deep-forgivness is a great thing
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Pgh,
I don't need them but thanks. It's not a dark personality. It's the style I choose to write in more often than not. I do have ....lighter pieces here if you wish to try those instead. Thanks to all for the comments |
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beautifully written hanged....
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Beautifully written
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