Topic: Dark
HangedMan's photo
Thu 08/23/07 12:57 AM
dark
is the path i walk
cold
is the air i breathe
sharp
are the words of hate
heavy
is the load i bear
shame
is the claok i wear
dark,cold,sharp heavy shame
darkens my every dream
freezes my every thought
sharpens my every need
weighs on my every deed
cruel
are the wounds that bleed
damning
the judgements of me
leaden
are the skies above
mocking
are the things I seek
laughter
is the thanks i recieve
cruel,damning,leaden mocking laughter
pain my only friend
punitive my reward
heavy my every thought
derision my applause
light
is the touch love
lost
is a soul alone
bitter
is the drink of life
sad
is a story told
dream
is a faded scene
light,lost,bitter sad dream
soft my lonely sighs
spent my energies
stinging my tears fall
sorrow my daily meal
a long dark lonely road is all that faces me

Katertots37's photo
Thu 08/23/07 12:59 AM
Very moving hanged...

zanne46's photo
Thu 08/23/07 01:04 AM
INTENCE.........

no photo
Thu 08/23/07 01:39 AM
nothing that a trip to Hawaii or mexico won't cure!!!:wink: laugh

LAMom's photo
Thu 08/23/07 02:21 AM
((((( Larry)))))
The road of life we are on sometimes seems dark and lonely,, in these times we heal and within ones healing life is reborn, you my friend have an incredible soul a soul full of hope, love and everlasting life,,, Your words once again have left me in Awe,,

Amazing flowerforyou flowerforyou

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Thu 08/23/07 03:15 AM
intense dark emotionsflowerforyou

no photo
Thu 08/23/07 04:42 AM
..antidepressants..dark personalities are passe my friend!

frankfk's photo
Thu 08/23/07 04:45 AM
"NO MATTER WHAT, THERE IS A LIGHT BY THE END OF THE TUNNEL"flowerforyou

Midwestern_Gal's photo
Thu 08/23/07 05:44 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 08/23/07 10:14 AM
very deep-forgivness is a great thing

HangedMan's photo
Thu 08/23/07 03:51 PM
Pgh,

I don't need them but thanks. It's not a dark personality. It's the style I choose to write in more often than not. I do have ....lighter pieces here if you wish to try those instead.



Thanks to all for the commentsflowerforyou drinker

ChelleBelle's photo
Thu 08/23/07 03:53 PM
beautifully written hanged....

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 08/23/07 03:55 PM
Beautifully written:smile: