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Topic: Extreme Pain or
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Tue 06/18/13 01:43 PM
Is it extreme pain or Have I let go? Things don't seem to hurt As much I was hospitalized once With extreme pain At some point I felt nothing at all Had I let go? The doctor told me The body will feel nothing If the limits have been met I feel sleepy not Numb My mind still functioning With eyes closed No tears yet Not sure if any will come Not numb, just seeing with Eyes closed

Journeyman236 Joined Thu 05/09/13 Posts: 2786	Tue 06/18/13 02:04 PM


likelytohavefun Joined Thu 10/18/12 Posts: 11	Tue 06/18/13 03:01 PM
As if a cocoon, a butterfly will emerge.

Momoiro_Usagi_7 Joined Sun 05/12/13 Posts: 1450	Tue 06/18/13 04:49 PM
WOw ...Much love and Hugs I love this poem. Thank you!!!

Momoiro_Usagi_7 Joined Sun 05/12/13 Posts: 1450	Tue 06/18/13 04:51 PM
As if a cocoon, a butterfly will emerge. The Pupa is a very dangerous place to be in life! A road less Traveled! ^__^

oldlady75 Joined Tue 06/18/13 Posts: 6	Thu 06/20/13 10:15 PM
WOW! That was great! Very deep, I loved it!

sanjeev009 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 2115	Thu 06/20/13 11:00 PM
whats painic never understand

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 06/21/13 03:08 AM
Reeeeeeaaaaallllllll nice

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 06/21/13 03:38 AM
Like,like,like

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