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Water hits from showerhead,
in a sustained, warm cascade down my front and back skin lights up as I breathe in shallow breaths the depth of my mind's eye mired in steam and a shape behind the foggy glass partition that now opens to reveal that same shape, sultry and sensual as she slides the glass back joining me she is glorious her shape is perfection her lips purse wanting, needing to be kissed her body shivers when the water cascades down her back and front her hair matted and close, clinging to her supple, soft skin My ardor cannot be held in much longer as I lean forward and take her into my open arms she relaxes immediately, closes her eyes rests her head on my shoulder Her arms lock around my neck we stand there, enjoying the quiet the only sound is the water the only other element, the steam the only mood passing between us: contentment. The promise of her lips beckons again. Begging, almost. Her wishes shall be fulfilled. Her lusting heart, sated. An hour passes before the water turns off... and we are huddled on the floor, catching our breath, skin tingling, bodies cooling down replete and satisfied. Contentment achieved. She cannot find the words... I tell her it's okay, I know she wants to be held. She knows I want to hold her. So I do. Minutes pass. She is drowsy. I put her to bed, kiss her forehead. And lie beside her, watching her sleep. I hope her dreams are golden! |
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Very nice, I've never had a shower like that. I want one!
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http://media.photobucket.com/user/janeykins_2006/media/DSCF5231.jpg.html?filters[term]=steamy%20shower&filters[primary]=images&filters[secondary]=videos&sort=1&o=4
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Very nice, I've never had a shower like that. I want one! Er....thanks for the compliment, im glad you liked it. |
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http://media.photobucket.com/user/janeykins_2006/media/DSCF5231.jpg.html?filters[term]=steamy%20shower&filters[primary]=images&filters[secondary]=videos&sort=1&o=4 your welcome Um.....oooookay. Ihave no clue what the source code is depicting, so.....oh, whatever! |
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So, comments critiques? I'd love to hear from you guys if you have anything to say.
Thanks for viewing anyway. Visit my profile and let's chat, k? And I'll be posting more stuff in the forums if you'd liketo hear more. See ya! J. |
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Nothing here? Okay, cool. Just thought I'd post some of my stuff here, but I guess the forums are a little bit of a busy place.
I'll post more stuff later on but only if I get requests. Thanks for coming to my post anyway. |
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Beautifully written......very sensual.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............
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Beautifully written......very sensual.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmm............. What can I say, I'm a bit of a romanticist. Thanks, though. |
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Leah has a "steamy poetry" thread that pops up every now and then.....this poem belongs in there. :bigsmile.....very nice.
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*fans herself*
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Leah has a "steamy poetry" thread that pops up every now and then.....this poem belongs in there. :bigsmile.....very nice. might be worth checking out.....but im afraid don't know who leah is. thanks though. |
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*fans herself* *tosses you a bottle of water from a cooler* Hydrate every now and then, kay? It's healthy. |
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Edited by
jemare
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Tue 06/25/13 08:26 PM
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might be worth checking out.....but im afraid don't know who leah is. thanks though. Could be because I spelled her name wrong "Leigh" is a talented poet in her own right. Stick around here long enough and you will will figure out who she is . She has been one of the fortunate ones who has found a great match here. They're great people who still keep us enjoying their wit, poems and graciousness. Well HER poems and graciousness, and I don't think he'd like word "graciousness" associated with him |
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might be worth checking out.....but im afraid don't know who leah is. thanks though. Could be because I spelled her name wrong "Leigh" is a talented poet in her own right. Stick around here long enough and you will will figure out who she is . She has been one of the fortunate ones who has found a great match here. They're great people who still keep us enjoying their wit, poems and graciousness. Well HER poems and graciousness, and I don't think he'd like word "graciousness" associated with him cool, cool. |
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