Topic: Cleanse (erotic poetry)
JRonin's photo
Mon 06/17/13 10:34 PM
Water hits from showerhead,

in a sustained, warm cascade

down my front and back

skin lights up

as I breathe in shallow

breaths

the depth of my mind's eye

mired in steam

and a shape behind the foggy glass partition

that now opens to reveal

that same shape,

sultry and sensual

as she slides the glass back

joining me

she is glorious

her shape is perfection

her lips purse

wanting, needing to be kissed

her body shivers when the water cascades

down her back and front

her hair matted and close,

clinging to her supple, soft skin

My ardor cannot be held in much longer

as I lean forward and take her into my open arms

she relaxes immediately,

closes her eyes

rests her head on my shoulder

Her arms lock around my neck

we stand there, enjoying the quiet

the only sound is the water

the only other element, the steam

the only mood passing between us:

contentment.

The promise of her lips beckons again.

Begging, almost.

Her wishes shall be fulfilled.

Her lusting heart, sated.

An hour passes before the water turns off...

and we are huddled on the floor, catching our breath,

skin tingling, bodies cooling down

replete and satisfied.

Contentment achieved.

She cannot find the words...

I tell her it's okay,

I know she wants to be held.

She knows I want to hold her.

So I do.

Minutes pass.

She is drowsy.

I put her to bed, kiss her forehead.

And lie beside her, watching her sleep.

I hope her dreams are golden!

pkh's photo
Tue 06/18/13 01:41 AM
Very nice, I've never had a shower like that. I want one!

no photo
Tue 06/18/13 02:12 AM
http://media.photobucket.com/user/janeykins_2006/media/DSCF5231.jpg.html?filters[term]=steamy%20shower&filters[primary]=images&filters[secondary]=videos&sort=1&o=4
your welcome

JRonin's photo
Tue 06/18/13 05:50 PM

Very nice, I've never had a shower like that. I want one!


Er....thanks for the compliment, im glad you liked it.

smokin

JRonin's photo
Tue 06/18/13 09:14 PM

http://media.photobucket.com/user/janeykins_2006/media/DSCF5231.jpg.html?filters[term]=steamy%20shower&filters[primary]=images&filters[secondary]=videos&sort=1&o=4
your welcome


Um.....oooookay. Ihave no clue what the source code is depicting, so.....oh, whatever!

JRonin's photo
Wed 06/19/13 09:31 PM
So, comments critiques? I'd love to hear from you guys if you have anything to say.

Thanks for viewing anyway. Visit my profile and let's chat, k?

And I'll be posting more stuff in the forums if you'd liketo hear more.

See ya!

J.

JRonin's photo
Fri 06/21/13 09:05 PM
Nothing here? Okay, cool. Just thought I'd post some of my stuff here, but I guess the forums are a little bit of a busy place.

I'll post more stuff later on but only if I get requests.

Thanks for coming to my post anyway.

Affectionisme's photo
Sat 06/22/13 04:31 AM
Beautifully written......very sensual.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............

JRonin's photo
Sat 06/22/13 08:00 PM

Beautifully written......very sensual.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............


What can I say, I'm a bit of a romanticist. Thanks, though.

jemare's photo
Sat 06/22/13 08:59 PM
Leah has a "steamy poetry" thread that pops up every now and then.....this poem belongs in there. :bigsmile.....very nice.

shortfire8521's photo
Sat 06/22/13 09:06 PM
*fans herself*


JRonin's photo
Sat 06/22/13 09:41 PM

Leah has a "steamy poetry" thread that pops up every now and then.....this poem belongs in there. :bigsmile.....very nice.


might be worth checking out.....but im afraid don't know who leah is. thanks though.

JRonin's photo
Sat 06/22/13 09:43 PM

*fans herself*




*tosses you a bottle of water from a cooler*

Hydrate every now and then, kay? It's healthy.

drinker

jemare's photo
Tue 06/25/13 08:18 PM
Edited by jemare on Tue 06/25/13 08:26 PM


might be worth checking out.....but im afraid don't know who leah is. thanks though.




Could be because I spelled her name wrong slaphead "Leigh" is a talented poet in her own right. Stick around here long enough and you will will figure out who she is :wink: . She has been one of the fortunate ones who has found a great match here. They're great people who still keep us enjoying their wit, poems and graciousness. Well HER poems and graciousness, and I don't think he'd like word "graciousness" associated with him laugh

JRonin's photo
Wed 06/26/13 09:43 PM



might be worth checking out.....but im afraid don't know who leah is. thanks though.




Could be because I spelled her name wrong slaphead "Leigh" is a talented poet in her own right. Stick around here long enough and you will will figure out who she is :wink: . She has been one of the fortunate ones who has found a great match here. They're great people who still keep us enjoying their wit, poems and graciousness. Well HER poems and graciousness, and I don't think he'd like word "graciousness" associated with him laugh


cool, cool.