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Would you like to play? Thought I'd see if we could all write a poem all together, one line at a time, everyone having a go.
Guidelines: 1) your line should finish or start a rhyming couplet (e.g. if the two lines above rhyme then you start a new rhyme; if they don't, your line has to rhyme with the one above) 2) quote the complete poem so far before you add your line 3) must be in iambic tetrameter (e.g. "Da-DA da-DA da-DA da-DUM") Hope that makes sense! Here's line one, good luck everybody and have fun with it: I do not know where this will go |
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Edited by
Journeyman236
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Mon 06/10/13 05:42 AM
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I do not know where this will go
beginning fast and ending slow (I don't think quoting every line is a good idea cuz like after 10 or so lines the page will take up too much room) Also, I think there should be some policing done to where if 2 people answer the same line, 1 should be decided on & give the other a chance to write a new line. What do you think? |
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I do not know where this will go
beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you sorry Jezzemy, I didn't go to poetry school so I don't know much of what you are talking about:-( |
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I do not know where this will go
beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you through darkened skies or ones of blue |
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I do not know where this will go
beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you through darkened skies or ones of blue Work not done because of you |
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me |
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pkh
I like your line better |
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see |
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed |
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed Greed rhymes with need and seed, please |
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Edited by
goldenhinde
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Mon 06/10/13 09:19 AM
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I don't know where this will go Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed Greed rhymes with need and seed, please http://youtu.be/FG1NrQYXjLU |
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Edited by
Jez
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Mon 06/10/13 09:50 AM
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed |
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed The blood pumping within these veins |
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Edited by
Journeyman236
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Mon 06/10/13 10:22 AM
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed The blood pumping within these veins a heart of love but yet it strains |
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Edited by
goldenhinde
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Mon 06/10/13 10:47 AM
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed The blood pumping within these veins a heart of love but yet it strains I fold my wings in bitter rain |
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed The blood pumping within these veins a heart of love but yet it strains I fold my wings in bitter rain This old crow caws and caws again |
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This is turning out Awesome!
  Great job so far everyone!
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I don't know where this will go
Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed The blood pumping within these veins a heart of love but yet it strains I fold my wings in bitter rain This old crow caws and caws again And swoops across the swaying wheat |
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I don't know where this will go Beginning fast and ending slow As an old crow I would fly straight to you Through darkened skies or ones of blue Look and you will find me find me and you will soon see My eyes shine of lust and greed My body's field to plough and seed The blood pumping within these veins a heart of love but yet it strains I fold my wings in bitter rain This old crow caws and caws again And swoops across the swaying wheat I alight upon his outstretched arm I rest my head under his chin My kisses cover his grin I build a nest in him Beloved Scare Crow |
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your all mental people but I like it
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