Topic: YOU JUST LEFT
Affectionisme's photo
Sun 05/26/13 01:41 AM
I can't believe - you've gone away -without a word - you did'nt say - you've disappeared - from this space - to which your presence - had once graced - i cannot believe - or even concieve - that you are now - no longer with me - my world is empty - the sparkle has gone - what did i ever?..- do wrong?......

pkh's photo
Sun 05/26/13 04:19 AM

I can't believe - you've gone away -without a word - you did'nt say - you've disappeared - from this space - to which your presence - had once graced - i cannot believe - or even concieve - that you are now - no longer with me - my world is empty - the sparkle has gone - what did i ever?..- do wrong?......

you didn't do anything. Keep writing and get it out I wish you well

Affectionisme's photo
Sun 05/26/13 07:09 AM
Thank you pkh.....i write poems...and yes it gets it all off my chest....i have cried myself dry....now i am trying to move on.....

pkh's photo
Sun 05/26/13 10:50 AM

Thank you pkh.....i write poems...and yes it gets it all off my chest....i have cried myself dry....now i am trying to move on.....
i have read your poems there good I know it's not easy it will take time. My best to you

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Sun 05/26/13 10:55 AM


Very nice affection
I hope you find your heart...
:heart: :heart:
flowerforyou

oldhippie1952's photo
Sun 05/26/13 10:56 AM
soulful

BettyB's photo
Sun 05/26/13 11:13 AM

I can't believe - you've gone away -without a word - you did'nt say - you've disappeared - from this space - to which your presence - had once graced - i cannot believe - or even concieve - that you are now - no longer with me - my world is empty - the sparkle has gone - what did i ever?..- do wrong?......


Nice write.

Don't feel YOU did anything wrong. He did...not you.

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Sun 05/26/13 12:35 PM
This is very good, short & to the point. Sorrowfully well spoken great job :thumbsup:

Affectionisme's photo
Sun 05/26/13 02:52 PM
Thank you kik2me....that is kind of you.........

Affectionisme's photo
Sun 05/26/13 02:54 PM
Thankyou.....old hippie.....

Affectionisme's photo
Sun 05/26/13 02:55 PM
Thank you BettyB....i see that now....

Affectionisme's photo
Sun 05/26/13 02:59 PM
Thank you celibatelover......

Affectionisme's photo
Fri 05/31/13 06:40 PM
Thankyou oldhippie....

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Fri 05/31/13 06:49 PM
flowers :thumbsup: