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I can't believe - you've gone away -without a word - you did'nt say - you've disappeared - from this space - to which your presence - had once graced - i cannot believe - or even concieve - that you are now - no longer with me - my world is empty - the sparkle has gone - what did i ever?..- do wrong?......
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I can't believe - you've gone away -without a word - you did'nt say - you've disappeared - from this space - to which your presence - had once graced - i cannot believe - or even concieve - that you are now - no longer with me - my world is empty - the sparkle has gone - what did i ever?..- do wrong?...... |
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Thank you pkh.....i write poems...and yes it gets it all off my chest....i have cried myself dry....now i am trying to move on.....
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Thank you pkh.....i write poems...and yes it gets it all off my chest....i have cried myself dry....now i am trying to move on..... |
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Very nice affection I hope you find your heart... |
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soulful
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I can't believe - you've gone away -without a word - you did'nt say - you've disappeared - from this space - to which your presence - had once graced - i cannot believe - or even concieve - that you are now - no longer with me - my world is empty - the sparkle has gone - what did i ever?..- do wrong?...... Nice write. Don't feel YOU did anything wrong. He did...not you. |
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This is very good, short & to the point. Sorrowfully well spoken great job
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Thank you kik2me....that is kind of you.........
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Thankyou.....old hippie.....
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Thank you BettyB....i see that now....
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Thank you celibatelover......
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Thankyou oldhippie....
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